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Like an intimate massage, our lips embrace in a kiss. And in that perfect moment, two hearts experience bliss. Love grows exponentially, getting stronger with each day. For once rooted in my soul, nothing can take it away. At the birth of our daughter, my heart nearly burst with pride. For your tears of happiness touched me, and I cried inside. A broken remnant of war, I'm more manikin than man. But love rallies around me, and I do the best I can. Behind a bastion of hope, my spirit's undefeated. And yet, deep in my being, I can't help but feel cheated. (Quatrain) 11/12/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:58:00 PM
Very powerful lines: "A broken remnant of war" "Behind a bastion of hope my spirit’s undefeated. And yet deep in my being, I can’t help feeling cheated." I love that this is tribute to wounded war veterans, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thank you Line, your encouraging comments are truely appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/18/2015 9:16:00 AM
Very strong emotions... well written... and an amazing choice of topic. A well deserved 7 to you. :)
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Angie, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 11/12/2015 1:38:00 PM
Emile touching and loving. What a write so heartfelt and sincere. Full of emotion and love. What a love my friend. A 7.
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Michael, your encouraging comments are truely appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/12/2015 1:05:00 PM
exceptional write my friend:-) It brought a lump to my throat:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you Jan, your wonderful comments are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 11/12/2015 10:55:00 AM
and there go my goose bumps. This is from deep within your heart, Emile. Beautiful.
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Date: 11/12/2015 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Lin, I enjoy your visits very much. Emile.

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