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Cheated

Cheated

Why does one child walk, 
another talk, 
while still yet another 
will say nothing
the rest of their life? 

How much loss can be endured?
How many dreams dashed
against the rocks 
before given any chance
of flight? 

Anguish fills a mother's heart, 
and I am overcome for the moment... 
again and again in my life. 
Jesus, my anchor in the storm. 
The Lord my guide in the darkness. 
My Savior, 
who watches over my child, 
and gives comfort 
when none can be found. 

Angels surround 
and around, 
keeping close watch on 
the gifted, drifted from perfection, 
and lost in rejection.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jullion Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:58 PM
I can link with your poem, especially the final verse. I had one such son. Life can break your heart so many many times. Blessings to you Ann.
Wolf Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Oh, that child teaches us the beauty of silence. ~ Just sayin'
Foster Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Yes, but if your child can not talk... or struggles... you will find a new pain you never knew you could feel... But then others... haha... Happy days... to you my friend. Ann
Peck Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Very sad and beautiful, Ann. So many things are unfair, and we make them worse by rejection.
Foster Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 8:57 AM
Not everyone can overcome their moment of truth... rejection is easy... acceptance... now that is hard, rough and even painful. Prayers for your days... Thank you Ann for stopping by... You are a fine poet... Thank you for your comments... Ann
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