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He thought he’d cheated death, Then gasped his final breath… For Susan's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/30/2011 8:11:00 PM
Short, sweet and to the point! You've been on a clever roll today, Jack. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2011 1:24:00 PM
Simple yet so complex! Very incredible write Jack! Such emotion driven poem! Great Epigram!! Terrific work!!
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Date: 10/30/2011 12:58:00 PM
I like the surprise of the second line. Creative piece. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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