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Voice Poetry Contest sponsored by Eve Roper

Picture #3 ~ The Tram by Paul Gustave Fischer

September 21, 2023

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I pick up their idle chatter five days of the week. Conversation with other passengers, I never seek to learn of a secret one of them might privately leak. But try as I might, I cannot help but overhear a new recipe she tried, or the reason for his fear. Sometimes, I wish I was deaf, at least in one ear! I try reading my newspaper and ignore the prattle, but often it's louder than the train car's rattle. I'm not interested in the gossip of their tittle tattle. At least the man with the cigar, smokes it outside, or I'd take another tram. Cigar stench I can't abide. I live in the burbs, so it's a long way home I ride. Today, there's a young lady who wouldn't take a seat. She looks worried, or at least somewhat browbeat, like the people I work with down at Dun & Bradstreet. I often wonder what's on the young conductor's mind. Does he despise his job because he feels confined? I'm off at the next stop, where I leave them all behind.

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Date: 9/25/2023 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Lin. Your poem is so well composed and the scene is so well portrayed.
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lin. Great descriptive with emotion poem. Many blessings
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Date: 9/25/2023 4:02:00 AM
Good morning, Eve and thank you for honoring my entry.
Date: 9/22/2023 2:26:00 AM
Very well explained, Lin, you gave him voice:)
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Date: 9/22/2023 2:33:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jo. I’m not sure why I chose to give him the voice. Thoughts of what he’d be thinking just started filling my head. Lol
Date: 9/22/2023 2:12:00 AM
Hi Lin, You painted such a good image of a passenger on a train. Your gifted pen gave life to the scene. It was like I was a passenger too. Top-notch content and rhymes. Best of luck in the contest. Outstanding job:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/22/2023 2:16:00 AM
Alexis, your review started my morning with s smile at your kind thoughts. Thank you ever so much.
Date: 9/21/2023 9:53:00 AM
Picture and poetically perfect Lin. Thanks
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Date: 9/21/2023 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jeff.
Date: 9/21/2023 5:23:00 AM
Wonderful story, poem... enjoyed. Wishing you a win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/21/2023 2:20:00 PM
Thanks so much, Gina. I'm so glad you like it. I already know you are blessed. You have a happy smile.
Date: 9/21/2023 5:20:00 AM
You portrayed the scene in the picture so perfectly. I didnt need to see the image to imagine the conversations taking place and can almost smell the cigar fumes. hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I couldn't see any of the pictures Eve posted at first, but when I saw this one yesterday, it was almost like I could hear what that man was thinking. Hate cigar stink, but I love a good smelling pipe tobacco.
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