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Chasing Alice

Go ask Alice
When she’s ten feet tall
And if you go chasing rabbits
And you know you’re going to fall

Go Ask Alice (Jefferson Airplane)

CHASING ALICE

down the rabbit hole
chasing Alice
i’d not ask her a thing
i’d notice
she’s ten feet tall
but no bigger than a twig

down the rabbit hole
a spiral
of psychedelic things
the queen of hearts
tea and tarts

down the rabbit hole
never hotter
a solid chill
she’s not the center
of the universe

down the rabbit hole
i glimpse her blue dress
her youthful blond hair
tumbling
into space

down the rabbit hole
when will this race
end
when will i ascend
she never will
she’s downing pills

down the rabbit hole
i rub my eyes
i’m seeing things

my eyes open
i’m in bed
i step out
and fall
back in

7/23/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:38 AM
The whimsy in here was so clever and subtle and lively!
Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 1:12 AM
You have sent me iin wonderland. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Yay! :) Hugs ~ Kim
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Perfection captured in this Kim. Only Alice, when she's ten feet tall...I love it! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Linda!
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