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Go ask Alice When she’s ten feet tall And if you go chasing rabbits And you know you’re going to fall Go Ask Alice (Jefferson Airplane) CHASING ALICE down the rabbit hole chasing Alice i’d not ask her a thing i’d notice she’s ten feet tall but no bigger than a twig down the rabbit hole a spiral of psychedelic things the queen of hearts tea and tarts down the rabbit hole never hotter a solid chill she’s not the center of the universe down the rabbit hole i glimpse her blue dress her youthful blond hair tumbling into space down the rabbit hole when will this race end when will i ascend she never will she’s downing pills down the rabbit hole i rub my eyes i’m seeing things my eyes open i’m in bed i step out and fall back in 7/23/2022

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Date: 7/30/2022 9:38:00 AM
The whimsy in here was so clever and subtle and lively!
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Date: 7/24/2022 1:12:00 AM
You have sent me iin wonderland. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2022 5:41:00 AM
Yay! :) Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/23/2022 8:53:00 AM
Perfection captured in this Kim. Only Alice, when she's ten feet tall...I love it! Linda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2022 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!

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