Charred Service



Going to church,
it’s Sunday morn down south
Giddy feet youngsters
racing to the door of the temple,
having shrieks of joy erupting from their mouth
They are so glad when they get ushered in
While the solemn congregation gathers within
to hear another fiery sermon delivered
	with holy conviction
It’s hot down in Alabama, Birmingham,
as the sermon heat starts to kinetically expand
Explosive words demanding social justice
Old black folk hollering: Amen, amen!
They remember
	what their parents told them
about how it was back then
And the tears fall ...
as they hear the cry for change,
because nothing much has changed
Then at the rise of the Alleluia cries,
a river of tears gushes out ...
after the bomb explode
Shattering young dreams, windows
	and bodies
with terrible, mutilating shrapnel
Prayers of wails without words
from a charred church service is sadly heard


Dedicated to the memory of all the victims
who died during the civil rights struggle of the 60's
This poem was inspired by the poem, “Ballad of Birmingham,”
written by the late great black poet, Dudley Randall (1901 - 2000)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/6/2017 10:35:00 PM
What a heartfelt tribute and dedication, as I was reading part of me thought of the more recent event of the church shooting. I'd be interested in reading the poem that inspired this, and this is a fav!
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:37:00 PM
A horrifically sad day! Innocents stolen at the hand of the craven devil. Remember always: Addie Mae Collins, Cynthia Wesley, Carole Robertson, Carol Denise McNair
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:40:00 PM
visceral write powerfully expressed, freddie.. huggs
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