Charolette

Charlotte was her name
I've never understood 
why cars are given a gender
but it was his, my dads
an old Nash, a rambler
and he named it?
Sometimes he would ask me
to go along, burning up miles
seeing vistas, towns and such
windows down, wind blowing 
on us, we were rambling
my hand out, ups and downs.
Hours spent, no destinations
or hesitations, but ever present
were the anticipations
about what was beyond the next curve.
The verve was enticing, exciting
but then came the time to return home,
Charlotte had all the exercise she needed
as a middle aged car, but I couldn't contain
when asked "Where did you two go?"
I simply said, "There and back."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 8, 2013 at 7:27 PM
Dallas, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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December 2, 2013 at 8:34 AM
Congrats on the win, Dallas
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December 2, 2013 at 5:40 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Dallas !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 29, 2013 at 7:33 PM
As a former owner of my first car, a Nash Rambler I wish I had written this poem. Great Write!
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