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For the  Juxtaposition Poetry Contest of Regina Mcintosh

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They live like we do and look like we do. Inside their sometimes quintessential houses they reside oftentimes with a wife, maybe children. They work in jobs where we might work. Some may even be the preacher at a church. They could be a government official. What harm could there be in someone with great charm? Behind the doors of their houses, (perhaps with those proverbial white picket fences) they probably show at least the random signs of who they really are. It’s likely that someone sees something that isn’t just quite right, yet they are adept at manipulation, and easily, so easily, are people fooled by them. Meanwhile, they harbor the darkest of fantasies, and some of them will act these fantasies out. Somewhere in this world right now - somewhere in a big city nearby you, it’s very likely that a child or young woman was lured by some sweet words or perhaps simply and suddenly abducted. If not beneath the ground, they might be miserably languishing in a dingy basement locked up or even kept inside a box - fodder for the whims of the charming psychopath.

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Date: 7/14/2025 2:45:00 AM
Andrea, powerful writing of a story too true, congratulations on your win in the contest, hugs
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Date: 7/7/2025 8:29:00 PM
Very scary, very serious problem that seems to be growing. I think that it is often more than mental problems, I think spiritually that kind of person opens themselves up to host demonic manifestation. It's hard to hear what people can do to others in such horrific ways as well as horrible subtle ways. Seems like one could be safe at church, but you are right, even preachers can be vicious ravenous monsters, whitewashed sepultures full of dead men's bones, as the Bible would tell us. Scary poem to be sure Andrea, and a wise undercurrent of caution to beware!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/7/2025 10:09:00 PM
I watch lots of shows on these people . Most of them are not nice inside their families but fool those on the outside or vice versa. Very few are much like I describe here
Date: 7/6/2025 4:51:00 PM
A scary thought for sure. Well written write!
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Date: 7/5/2025 1:14:00 PM
This is most ridiculously odd and somewhat peculiar!! did I really fall down that confounded rabbit hole? Things will work themselves out, there is such a thing as karma, yes?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/7/2025 10:11:00 PM
I am a conspiracy theorist. I think clouds are being seeded . I think LA fires and the very unusual flooding last year out east were evil doings. That stuff that happened in Hawaii. Wow. It's all about feeding the greed of the wealthy. Among other things
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/6/2025 12:01:00 PM
You got everything right for sure Andrea! It's perfect ?? today absolutely that the world is in distress.ii feel dispond and sad the flooding and deaths happening in Texas. Also feel irked, that while children and grown ups were being swept awa bobo and yogi were giving to the song, YMCA
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2025 10:09:00 PM
Hopefully I got that juxtaposition thing right
Date: 7/5/2025 1:35:00 AM
Hi Andrea just stopped in to tell you that Poet Michael Jordan passed away. I don't know if you remember him. I have been helping my brother and many projects at home, also my wife wife is ill and I have been watching her and picking up all the slack. Sadly she is experiencing Dementia signs and it is a very difficult time in my life watching my wife go through this sad state in her life. Please keep her in your prayers. I am hoping to return writing when I catch up. I hope you and Joe are OK.
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Michael Tor
Date: 7/8/2025 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for your prayers...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2025 11:00:00 AM
Sorry I don't know Michael Jordan better here. I'll have to visit some of his poems to see if I had commented to him. so sorry too about your wife. It's a very sad thing to see this happen to a loved one and I dread it happening to me or Joe. Prayers for you.
Date: 7/4/2025 10:59:00 PM
Happy 4th of July, Andrea. Sociopaths, borderline psychopaths, the don't want to let go. They might try to do everything they possibly can to intimate or overwhelm their victims. They might cry out that they are the victims the abetters. Anyhow this piece has definitely touched me.i was hacked by poets in here. One is blocked but stil managers a way to annoy me.li had said , "you don't own me , he wrote "
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2025 11:02:00 AM
the world is getting more and more filled with these psychos. I think the ones here are harmless but one never knows for sure. Hope you get that guy off your back!
Date: 7/3/2025 10:53:00 AM
When in character, they are easily spotted. When out of character, they seem normal, even to themselves often oblivious of the other. That is the nature of such psychosis. Normal people cannot logically relate. There is no logic to psychosis. It can be spiritual or physical disease, combination of both. Which came first is up for debate. Depends on who one speaks to, law enforcement, doctor or priest. Regardless, such evil potential is always lurking in society, in every shadow of ill being. Quite a write my friend. Stirring to say the least.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2025 11:05:00 AM
If my theory is correct, it's even possible these people were born without a conscience which makes them less "responsible" for their actions than the rest of us. A scary thought!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/5/2025 11:03:00 AM
there is a question that haunts me. I kind of think some are just born "bad seeds" This looks possible when I watch crime show documentaries in which an entire family is loving and caring but there's that one kid out molesting animals and bullying his siblings, even at a very young age under the age of 4. It really makes me wonder!

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