Russell Sivey Poet Quatrain

Charming Hug

She has great freckles and a live wire voice
And red hair with beauty that can’t compare
Green eyes and lovely tonal lips displayed
Can hear her love by her motion she shares

I always hold her deep inside of me
Her glory lies outside of her beauty
Her real charm is beyond her simple looks
Her whole loving heart is just how I see

Her longing gaze is what I surely see
Deep within my soul I long to view her
So when I am near her I want to be
One with her heart, a Hug I must confer

Charming and inspiring are her great looks
There’s not a man on Earth that would not see
Her gorgeousness that’s fueled by her power
Not a second goes by that she’s not free

She always desires a lovely warm Hug
From any good looking man that surrounds
Hugs are her thing, no matter her beauty
All men win, from her heart of love astounds

Russell Sivey

Contest: HUGS
Sponsor: S. K. A. T.

5/28/2013

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Shadow Hamilton June 21, 2013 at 2:31 PM congrats a well deserved win Shadow x smiles

Sasha Maharaj June 5, 2013 at 1:39 AM Beautiful Indeed :)

Joyce Johnson June 2, 2013 at 9:31 PM You make her seem very hugable as well as hugs giving. Congratualtion on your big win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick June 2, 2013 at 8:39 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win, Russell! Well done! Always, Annalise

Connie Gildersleeve June 2, 2013 at 7:16 PM Congratulations on your super win. When I first read it I knew you aced it. A magnificent Quatrain. Warm Smiles, Connie

Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 7:52 AM Congratulations Russell

Seren Roberts June 2, 2013 at 3:54 AM Well done Russell first place and definitely earned. Loved the poem ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A June 1, 2013 at 8:17 PM Hi Russell, this is a very nice and charming hug.. I wish to give such vibes like this one day... Congratulations :-) on your very sweet hugging poem. always~ LINDA

Seosamh De Burca June 1, 2013 at 7:29 PM Congrats on your winning poem. Nicely done.

Carrie Richards June 1, 2013 at 5:45 PM Indeed a charmer this is!! Congratulations to you Russell!

Suzanne Delaney June 1, 2013 at 5:43 PM Congratulations for this fine winning poem. You really captured the theme. Luv, SuZ and a Hug

Tim Ryerson June 1, 2013 at 4:20 PM Russel - I have read many of your poems and I believe this is one of your best...Utterly charming! - Tim

Skat A June 1, 2013 at 1:51 PM Congratulations, Russell thanks for the nice warm HUGGING poems. Sending hugs your way. ~SKAT~

Adeleke Adeite June 1, 2013 at 1:41 PM I love the flow in this. Congrats on your great poem being placed in the Hugs contest, wishing you many more winnings. Love and Peace, Adeleke

Therese Bacha June 1, 2013 at 1:37 PM Beautiful my dear friend, congratulations, so so well deserved. Love Terry xo a 7>>>>

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 6:44 AM Reads like a winner to me...Good luck in the contest..Enjoyed reading it this morn..Soup Mail soon..Sara

John Loving Iii May 29, 2013 at 11:20 PM Someone loves Lucy

Nette Onclaud May 29, 2013 at 1:56 PM this is an affectionate piece that highlights the wonder of hugs in such a creative way... amazing work , russelll, and like i say as always...hugggs..:)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 12:45 PM Very outstanding! A know this will surely make it to her list. Well done and Good luck. AO

Demetrios Trifiatis May 29, 2013 at 6:15 AM From the art of a painter you turned to the art of a sculptor but with the same success! Marvelous writing inspiring love in the hearts of the reader for the masterpiece statue of your creation!

Timothy Hicks May 29, 2013 at 12:03 AM Sounds like a dynamite lady (with all that red hair and all). Best of luck on the competition... you did well with this!

Connie Gildersleeve May 28, 2013 at 1:38 PM Russell, magical integrations of words which passes great feelings. the soulemate secrete - a woman who completes you. You brought out passion in this poem. Warm Smiles, Connie