Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

Charmed Slumber

In the midst of midnight twilight 
sleep meekly fades in the moonlight. 
Umber earth and men encumber, 
nature’s chatter, charmed in slumber.
Tranquil dreams of peace, no sorrow, 
thankful for light of tomorrow.
Epic heartbeats waves break away 
warm cinders soothe the moment stay.


 
Date: 11/7/2018

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Carolyn Devonshire November 17, 2018 at 7:03 PM Congratulations on your win, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich November 15, 2018 at 8:04 PM So enchantingly soothing, Eve. A gem.

Janice Canerdy November 12, 2018 at 11:45 PM Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice

Janice Canerdy November 12, 2018 at 11:45 PM Soothing, appealing--well-written, Eve! Janice

Vladislav Raven November 12, 2018 at 4:07 PM Hi Eve, dropping by with my congratulations on the win with this wonderful piece. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Constance La France November 12, 2018 at 4:07 PM Eve, very nice, I like your poem a lot, best of luck in the contest ~

Ravi Sathasivam November 12, 2018 at 12:38 AM Excellent and beautifully penned. All the best for contest.

Gershon Wolf November 11, 2018 at 7:35 PM Just gorgeous in its rhythmic charm and surreal feel, Eve. Congrats on a wonderful win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier November 11, 2018 at 7:15 PM Congrats on your top win, Eve. Well done.

Michelle Faulkner November 10, 2018 at 4:37 PM Love this charming lullaby, good luck in the contest!

Arthur Vaso November 10, 2018 at 12:02 AM Very soothing poem Eve!

Judy Ball November 9, 2018 at 5:26 PM Makes me think of waking in y nice warm bed and not having to get up until I'm ready. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Laura Leiser November 9, 2018 at 3:36 PM Your poem creates such a calming effect and is lovely, Eve! Good luck in the contest! :)

Jack Horne November 9, 2018 at 2:38 PM oh, really love this

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2018 at 8:24 AM This is a lovely little poem, Eve:)

Vladislav Raven November 9, 2018 at 8:20 AM Hi Eve, this is such a romantic little gem you have written, in the solitude of night, "Charmed Slumber." Your gentle words lead the reader through a most excellent write. Wishing you all the best in the contest Eve. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Carolyn Devonshire November 9, 2018 at 5:03 AM Your poem has a surreal, romantic quality to it, Eve. You had me thinking of "Midsummer Night's Dream." I haven't looked at the contest rules, but this is quite a lovely entry. Wishing you success! Hugs, Carolyn

Mark Elam November 8, 2018 at 4:09 PM A soft beautiful flow. Thanks.

Chris Green November 8, 2018 at 1:14 PM Really nice Eve. Your poem has a comforting soft feel to it. Best of luck in the contest

Constance La France November 8, 2018 at 6:47 AM Eve, such a tranquil poem, lovely and best of luck in the contest ~

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 3:03 AM - A beautiful writing, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 8, 2018 at 1:47 AM You wrote this well Eve, not easy given you can only use eight per line.It's like a double hakiu. Good luck. Tom.