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Charmed Happenstance

Vanishing vestige of dank cavernous lobes My lonesome forsaken heart adrift Under the most alluring midnight crescent moon Towards a horizon yonder daubed with A loaded paintbrush of golden luminescence While levitating melodic whispers Of charm and sorcery perchance connive Mingling heavenward to set the stage For a divine encounter with a goddess Her wafting cloud ever so sublimely hovers Peculiarly fine exotic spicy fragrance Ensnaring my compliant heart By glorious happenstance Spellbound and mesmerized Flutters on the wings of dusk Reawakening a drowsing lust Rekindling and resuscitating the passion To a sublime apogee of celestial folly AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on January 18, 2019 for contest EIGHT WORD CHALLENGE-BARDENESQUE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON - RANKED 1ST

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 2/23/2019 11:02:00 PM

Interesting use of form and lovely romance, Line, enjoyed the read.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/24/2019 9:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sheri, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Sherilynn Kucharek

Date: 2/23/2019 11:17:00 AM

Wowzers! This is magnificent! I could smell the fragrance, and felt the journey ascending, and descending in a beautiful hypnotic bliss! Congratulations on your win! Much deserved!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2019 11:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sherilynn, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/22/2019 7:49:00 PM

Wow Line...this is truly worthy of your first place honor! Congratulations on your placement. This beaut is going into my Faves! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie=, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Bobby May

Date: 2/22/2019 6:57:00 PM

WOW Line 1st Place Congratulations

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 8:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bobby.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/22/2019 3:35:00 PM

Fabulous # 1 victory... :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for your charming comment, Timothy.

Charles Messina

Date: 2/22/2019 1:54:00 PM

Wonderful write, Line. Congratulations on your 1st place win with this fabulous poem. Charlie

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 2:06:00 PM

Thank you, Charles. Most appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 2/22/2019 7:48:00 AM

Great write and win Line..Congrats

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 8:19:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. Much appreciated.

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/22/2019 6:41:00 AM

Wow! Congrats. God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/22/2019 8:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Beata. Most appreciated.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/21/2019 5:17:00 PM

Congrats Line on a wonderful poem very reminiscent of Barden's style, a worthy winner!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 6:22:00 PM

Thank you very much, John. Most appreciated.

J P Marmaro

Date: 2/21/2019 3:06:00 PM

Splendidly done, both passionate and positive, and as per usual with you, linguistically and technically excellent as well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, JP, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Sherilynn Kucharek

Date: 2/21/2019 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations! Your poem is nothing short of exquisite! Extremely descriptive and deserving of first place! Well done! .......Sherilynn

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/21/2019 4:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sherilynn. Most appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2019 8:23:00 AM

That was incredible! This should do very well in the contest; best of luck to you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/20/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and most appreciated compliment, ML.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/19/2019 3:20:00 PM

Oh Line! Bravo!!! Definitely captured the spirit of this contest! this line: Ensnaring my compliant heart... well, says so much. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/19/2019 6:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, PS, for your lovely visit and compliment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/18/2019 9:51:00 PM

I am spellbound and mesmerized by this poem, my friend. Good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 11:20:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and much appreciated compliment, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/18/2019 9:42:00 PM

"To a sublime apogee of celestial folly" Wonderful line in a wonderful poem!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2019 6:49:00 PM

Nicely done. :~) Good luck in the contest...Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 11:20:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Eve.