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Charlotte's Elegy

Oh dearest Charlotte, bathed in morning light!
    A spirit graceful as a swallow's flight
    Through shadows deep, her laughter breaks the dawn
    While joy unfolds beneath the sun's first spawn

Oh dearest Charlotte, with her radiant glow!
    Her smiles like sunbeams dancing to and fro
    Each gesture bright as stars that pierce the dark
    While hearts she touches bear her golden mark

Oh dearest Charlotte, with her healing voice!
    Her words make weary souls at last rejoice
    Through whispered hopes that cleanse all guilt and pain
    Yet in her silence, secrets still remain

Oh dearest Charlotte, where has your light gone!
    Your voice once carried hope from dusk till dawn
    Within you dwells the strength that others seek
    Yet private sorrows make your spirit weak

Oh dearest Charlotte, faded from our sight!
    Your absence fills our hearts with darkest night
    The angel who brought warmth to souls distressed
    Has sought her peace, by her own grief oppressed

Oh dearest Charlotte, lying still and cold!
    No breath disturbs her form of gentle mold
    Her quest for peace has reached its final peak
    While one last teardrop graces her pale cheek

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Date: 12/15/2024 10:17:00 PM
Dear Vie, your poem is a beautiful and heartfelt tribute to Charlotte, capturing her radiant presence and the sorrow of her loss. The imagery of light and nature brings her spirit vividly to life, while the progression from joy to despair poignantly reflects the depth of her struggles. The closing lines, tender and melancholic, leave a lasting impression, honoring her memory with grace and emotion...Hugs
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