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Charlieku Contest Poem - Christmas

on the roof cookie crumbs unnoticed in the snow long sleigh marks excitement joyous laugh from window boy and girl Written 12-06-2018 Charlieku 3-3-3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/7/2018 6:41:00 AM

This reminds me of the first Christmas that I pulled into the driveway of my Niece's house; the kids were lying on the bed upstairs, looking out of the window and just waving and smiling, as we got out of the car. Well penned.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/7/2018 7:19:00 AM

It is marvelous to see these little dolls, they bring the REAL Christmas spirit into your life faster than anything else.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/7/2018 3:05:00 AM

A lovely Christmas hakiu Caren, can just see the children's faces. Tom Good luck.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/7/2018 3:35:00 AM

Thank you Tom. I could see them too.