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Charlie Brown

poor Charlie Brown
exposed as a clown
Lucy positions the football upright
Chuck Swings, and she yanks it from sight!

(not sure if this is a clerihew???) 

written by: Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 22, 2012
For CLERIHEW battle contest - Poet Destroyer

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Kim Merryman

January 29, 2012 at 3:06 PM

Congrats on your win, Diana! Cute clerihew. Love, Kim

Robert Pettit

January 28, 2012 at 10:52 PM

Wow, you won with this! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 28, 2012 at 9:00 AM

congrats Diana-Marie on a terrific win.. always loved Charlie Brown myself.. awesome piece luv..

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:12 PM

Thanks Linda-Marie:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2012 at 7:54 PM

I remember this cute one!! Congratulations.

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:14 PM

Thanks Andrea:)

Jon Arno

January 27, 2012 at 6:15 PM

Congratulations on your win. Good job. Best regards, Jon

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:14 PM

Thank you Jon:)

David Williams

January 27, 2012 at 8:32 AM

Diana-Marie congrats on your win, reads like a Clerihew to me..David

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:15 PM

Thank you David:)

Carol Eastman

January 27, 2012 at 8:25 AM

Congratulations on your win... may ther be many more...

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:16 PM

Can't believe I actually won! Thanks Carol:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 27, 2012 at 7:04 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:17 PM

Thank you Carol:)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

January 27, 2012 at 6:07 AM

Congrats on your fine clerihew!! Brings back childhood memories! Blessings Rhonda

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:18 PM

Thank you Rhonda:)

Poet Destroyer A

January 27, 2012 at 12:59 AM

DIANA, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 28, 2012 at 7:11 PM

Thanks p.d:) WOW! Can't believe it!

David Williams

January 23, 2012 at 6:36 AM

yahoo, like it Diana..David

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2012 at 9:07 PM

YES< this is indeed clerihew and a VERY good one at that!!!

Poet Destroyer A

January 22, 2012 at 8:19 PM

Diana, thank you.. for the entry...p.d.

Gwendolen Song

January 22, 2012 at 5:39 PM

ps..I am not an expert on this form...like u, I am just learning. I do believe yours is perfect to form though...All smiles here. I love to see young poets succeed. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

January 22, 2012 at 5:37 PM

Isn't it JUST LIKE LUCY to pull a prank on Charlie Brown like this, Diana? I love your clerihew...I think u are a very very fast learner...It must be GENETIC!!...Like mother, like daugher..I love reading your mom's poetry.... I haven't entered one in this contest bc I don't know which one is the best..hmmm> You chose a wonderful character to write about. Gwendolen

Kim Merryman

January 22, 2012 at 5:33 PM

Good one Diana-Marie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Jancarl Campi

January 22, 2012 at 3:52 PM

Oh my poor charlie brown. This is a great poem. I looked in several of my books on poetry and none mentioned a Clerihew. Anyway, good luck, Jancarl

Diana-Marie Bombardieri

January 22, 2012 at 4:02 PM

I looked up Clerihew on poetrysoup "forms of poetry" and I think what I wrote is right? But it seems that everyones form is a little different. thanks for checking!

Charlie Brown

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