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Charlie Brown

poor Charlie Brown
exposed as a clown
Lucy positions the football upright
Chuck Swings, and she yanks it from sight!

(not sure if this is a clerihew???) 

written by: Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 22, 2012
For CLERIHEW battle contest - Poet Destroyer

Copyright © Diana-Marie Bombardieri | Year Posted 2012

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Kim Merryman Date: 1/29/2012 3:06:00 PM Congrats on your win, Diana! Cute clerihew. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/28/2012 10:52:00 PM Wow, you won with this! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/28/2012 9:00:00 AM congrats Diana-Marie on a terrific win.. always loved Charlie Brown myself.. awesome piece luv.. Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:12:00 PM Thanks Linda-Marie:)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/27/2012 7:54:00 PM I remember this cute one!! Congratulations. Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:14:00 PM Thanks Andrea:)

Jon Arno Date: 1/27/2012 6:15:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Good job. Best regards, Jon Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:14:00 PM Thank you Jon:)

David Williams Date: 1/27/2012 8:32:00 AM Diana-Marie congrats on your win, reads like a Clerihew to me..David Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:15:00 PM Thank you David:)

Carol Eastman Date: 1/27/2012 8:25:00 AM Congratulations on your win... may ther be many more... Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:16:00 PM Can't believe I actually won! Thanks Carol:)

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/27/2012 7:04:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" Diana-Marie. Love, Carol Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:17:00 PM Thank you Carol:)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/27/2012 6:07:00 AM Congrats on your fine clerihew!! Brings back childhood memories! Blessings Rhonda Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:18:00 PM Thank you Rhonda:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/27/2012 12:59:00 AM DIANA, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/28/2012 7:11:00 PM Thanks p.d:) WOW! Can't believe it!

David Williams Date: 1/23/2012 6:36:00 AM yahoo, like it Diana..David Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/22/2012 9:07:00 PM YES< this is indeed clerihew and a VERY good one at that!!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/22/2012 8:19:00 PM Diana, thank you.. for the entry...p.d. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/22/2012 5:39:00 PM ps..I am not an expert on this form...like u, I am just learning. I do believe yours is perfect to form though...All smiles here. I love to see young poets succeed. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 1/22/2012 5:37:00 PM Isn't it JUST LIKE LUCY to pull a prank on Charlie Brown like this, Diana? I love your clerihew...I think u are a very very fast learner...It must be GENETIC!!...Like mother, like daugher..I love reading your mom's poetry.... I haven't entered one in this contest bc I don't know which one is the best..hmmm> You chose a wonderful character to write about. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 1/22/2012 5:33:00 PM Good one Diana-Marie. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 1/22/2012 3:52:00 PM Oh my poor charlie brown. This is a great poem. I looked in several of my books on poetry and none mentioned a Clerihew. Anyway, good luck, Jancarl Login to Reply Diana-Marie Bombardieri Date: 1/22/2012 4:02:00 PM I looked up Clerihew on poetrysoup "forms of poetry" and I think what I wrote is right? But it seems that everyones form is a little different. thanks for checking!