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“Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight! For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night.” William Shakespeare, Romeo & Juliet Charisma When he flashed that smile, with dimples and perfect chin, the ladies’ knees grew weak and Romeos couldn’t win. Not just the smile, but the North star twinkle in his eyes… and the wink, not a blink, but a smoothness that electrifies. He carries himself with grace, polite, yet bold and witty. Around this charisma-dynamo, the opposite sex feels pretty. He has his pick of every girl, in college, to his friends’ chagrin, but the new girl, with Juliet-charisma, he’d have to kneel to win. 2/3/2023 Writing Challenge - C Words Sponsor: Constance La France

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/16/2023 4:40:00 PM

So I did! And Sara said yes! Loved the poem, Kim. (Didn't really have that many interested though) lol :-) Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2023 5:58:00 PM

We only need the one :) Thanks, Bill!

Constance La France

Date: 2/9/2023 3:35:00 PM

Kim, wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done, I like the quote and image too, Constance

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2023 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Constance!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2023 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely/fun~~write/picture. Have a blessed day..............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2023 10:59:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Valsa George

Date: 2/5/2023 9:52:00 PM

So this becomes a contest between two people- he and she- of equal charisma ! If he succeeds in winning her, what a lovely pair they will make. A Beautiful entry for the contest ! Congratulations on your win, dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2023 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2023 4:20:00 PM

This is an absolutely stunning piece, Kim. Please accept my heartfelt congratulations on your win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2023 7:48:00 PM

Gosh, you've done such a nice job of describing me here -- er, uh, ahem, sputter, cough, lol... Someone once almost called me Romeo, but she stopped after the 'Alfie' part. (Alfa Romeo). Oh, well...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/5/2023 5:47:00 AM

You’re just too funny…O Romeo…Romeo…where for art thou? ;)

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2023 12:34:00 PM

Very nicely done Kim, I like the last line, I wrote a poem for this contest but unfortunately the contest was already closed...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2023 7:25:00 PM

I hate when that happen! Thank you, Joe!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/4/2023 7:55:00 AM

- He was every lady's man ... the new girl was wise :) - Lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2023 7:26:00 PM

Yes, she was!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/3/2023 11:20:00 PM

Delightful and awesome poem, dear Kim. Beautiful picture and a lively dictate on charisma. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2023 7:26:00 PM

Thank you, Victor!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/3/2023 6:59:00 PM

A beautiful and sophisticated work of art! The photo is beautiful, and the saying fits well with it. You did a really good job of addressing the issue.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2023 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/3/2023 5:37:00 PM

An elegant and lovely creation! The picture and the quote are wonderful, too. You addressed the topic quite well. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2023 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn! :)