Chariot of Fire - a Collab With P Callus
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I first write with PAUL CALLUS. He is one among the best poets and my friends here.. :)
I shall never forget how it all began to us.. :) LOVER AND FRIEND was our first poem together.We cram for some hours to enter it on a contest with a form we both aren't familiar with Rondeau Redouble. Our entry ended Honourable Mention for the first contest we enter it but I wasn't satisfied for I know it's more than that... :)
He is among my critics: a good one. We share some views and opinions in a very diplomatic and friendly way. I treasure the friendship that bloomed with the lines. I am so touched by him that I made some poems with the our friendship in my mind. though at times I consider him a big brother. teacher, too.. :)!
CHARIOT OF FIRE
I stand in silence and behold the sight,
staring in wonder, waiting for thunder.
A chariot of fire travels through the night.
The white-winged horses gallop in full flight
pulling at the reins; flowing are their manes
I stand in silence and behold the sight.
Where are they going? There’s a shining light
leading all the way, so they will not stray.
A chariot of fire travels through the night
amidst the heaven where in pure delight
resides the Master, the sweetest lover,
I stand in silence and behold the sight;
Blessings whisked to amble slowly with plight;
heartbeats race to sway, courage on display.
A chariot of fire travels through the night
armoured by God’s spirit. They ride like knights
fearless from pain; victory, their peak gain.
I stand in silence and behold the sight;
a chariot of fire travels through the night.
©O.E.Guillermo and P.Callus
Written last 5:07 pm, November 17, 2014
Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2014
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