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Light of day brings a visitor. Magnificent, grey-haired bastard from nowhere but here. Banters at me, "There is a plan for you." With hands spread illustrates, "From birth to death..." Pauses and waits for me. Then in revelation, "and in between..." Comes the promise, "is life."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2010 6:07:00 PM
Hi, Hai~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 3/16/2010 10:32:00 AM
Yep- this one blew me away too. As I scrolled down, it was like reading a novel...waiting for the explosion of the climax.
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Date: 8/16/2009 4:12:00 AM
This one Blew my tongue away=) And i wear white sockx cs they stand out from all the black soxc=p and when they get dirty i get to wash them so i never have stink sockx**ace**
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Date: 8/13/2009 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fantastic writing with us today Hai. May the sun shine on you today making your heart joyful. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 6:24:00 PM
Feels like I would watch some travel to be caught up to meet someone bewitching, shows him odd tricks and reaches his life, but then he he mysteriously as he came, very interesting, could be a story in many ways
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