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Chaotic Cousin Bess

Like quicksilver changing moods in a day Cousin Bess defies norms, such freakish will; A dazed mess about her I can’t even explain… Whenever late, she blames the neighbor’s cat For tearing the seams of her outlandish dress . But we have no kitties along our street… And she gives excuses, displaying waves of fur, That are tangles from her soaked hair in bad dye While she faces the mirror, “Yes, I’m the dame! Until her face cracks , puffed with layered rouge. Oh, more bedlam quakes when a grandchild asks If dear cousin is a walking antique; “ Don’t ever dare think I‘m that old,” vain Bess fumes… Everyone giggles inside as chaos runs wild, Upon hearing her sixty-five year old joints squeak! To prove the household wrong, she rocks and rolls Fluttering with a mop, the radio blasting on, Her eyes crazed by an Elvis' bebop tune… No, no, quirky Bess’ knees lock from asthma, Into the hospital we race, forgetting her wig! Brian Davey’s Contest: Cousin Chaos 6/10/2016

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Date: 6/21/2016 6:32:00 PM
congrats on your placement Nette "forgetting her wig" how chaotic that vision is!
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Date: 6/21/2016 1:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/21/2016 11:32:00 AM
Nice poem, Nette. Couldn't but help smileat the antics of antique Bess! Congrats on your win. ~karam~
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Date: 6/10/2016 9:26:00 PM
I love when you write like this. Great humor in this one, Nette. I loved it.
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:42:00 AM
- Nice to read Nette, great finish - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 8:04:00 AM
I love it, this makes me think of the song Delta Dawn.
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Date: 6/9/2016 10:41:00 PM
Cousin Bess is quite the handful! This is oozing humor! :-)
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Date: 6/9/2016 5:50:00 PM
Love it nette...I liked the internal rhyme and the twist at the end .
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Date: 6/9/2016 5:03:00 PM
Incredible poetry! If ever, I can deal with just only one in our kin. A Topsy- turvy runaway!
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:42:00 PM
Delightful and amusing poem, masterfully created by your pen dear, nette! Good luck
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:50:00 PM
Very amusing Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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