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Chaos and Order

No apparent order to illness, yet
Tonight it’s gunshot wound night
Last night was the night of the inflamed appendixes
Prior to that, the night of the living gallstones
There’s a full moon, no other reason
Price of tea is up in China, outside it’s freezing

     gurgling mountain creek
     blistered toes find sweet numbness 
     feet soak up relief

The human realm, chaos’ kingdom, no?
People of all levels of karmic progress 
Colliding in the same milieu of limited resources
My small mind imposes its order on the circus 
and finds it to be insufficiently logical…
Whose problem is that?

     clear blue mountain sky
     turns to storm, no reason, save
     wings of butterfly

The twisting and turning of the universe’s agenda
A bit beyond my little pea brain to grasp
But if I had to guess, and in fact, I do, 
It’s all in perfect, crazymaking order
Chaos is just what we’re not used to
Or can’t find the rhythm of familiarity

     angry skies open
     drenching torrential deluge
     accu-weather fail

6/8/16
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For contest: My Cousin Chaos
Sponsor: Brian Davey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/21/2016 6:21:00 PM
Great take on the contest theme and the presentation of your poem! Congrats on your placement Tom
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/21/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thanks, Brian! Another great contest idea!
Date: 6/21/2016 12:11:00 PM
This is a great poem full of wisdom! Favorite line: "Chaos is just what we're not used to"--a great thing for people like me, who tend to be too regimented, to remember! Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 6/21/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 6/21/2016 10:42:00 AM
Great write, Tom, especially your haiku. Congrats on a great win. ~karam~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/21/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thank you, Karam!
Date: 6/9/2016 6:12:00 AM
Hmmmm Define Chaos. To me it's simply something we don't understand. Something we can't control or make sense out of. We deal with a bit of it every day. Excellent piece Tom. I like it a lot. A seven from me. God Bles, JB
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/9/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Judy!
Date: 6/8/2016 2:37:00 PM
- We control the following chaos .... I wish you enough "rain" to make you appreciate the "sun" :) - Great written, good luck in the contest Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/8/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!

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