Chaos

obscure thoughts
   invade my mind
 causing fragmented
 images to form into
a whirlwind of chaos













Alexis Y.
03/20/2021

confusionfree verse

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Line Gauthier

March 30, 2021 at 12:46 PM

Beautiful brevity, Alexis ~

Richard Lamoureux

March 25, 2021 at 5:52 AM

I’m late to the party. Congrats on POTD. I am fortunate to mostly sleep well but on occasion have had my own tornadoes interrupt my slumber. I feel bad for my sweetie whom is regularly afflicted. I hope your chaos dissipates and a calm spirit comes over you. Blessings Rick.

Sam Kauffman

March 24, 2021 at 3:53 PM

Well done Alexis! Superb imagery that tells your story! Congratulations on your POTD. Short, sweet and very to the point! All the best. Blessings!

Caren Krutsinger

March 23, 2021 at 12:02 PM

Congratulations Alexis on POTD. Very lovely!

Panagiota Romios

March 23, 2021 at 2:15 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Alexis. This is beautifully penned. Panagiota

Mark Koplin

March 22, 2021 at 6:28 PM

Congratulations on potd my friend!! Awesome job!

Alexis Y.

March 22, 2021 at 5:37 PM

Hi Everyone, This poem getting chosen as a poem of the day was unexpected and surprising. Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

March 22, 2021 at 12:32 PM

Congratulations for POTD Alexis :)

Brandy Nicole

March 22, 2021 at 11:44 AM

"Fragmented thoughts invade my mind" Causing... "A whirlwind of chaos" Sometimes, moments are out of control and we cannot do anything about it. When this happens, it is best to unscramble such thoughts and find the positive in there somewhere. Congratulations Alexis, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy

Jan Allison

March 22, 2021 at 11:32 AM

I think I can relate my friend, so glad to see you awarded with POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

March 22, 2021 at 11:19 AM

Congrats on POTD! God bless you

John Watt

March 22, 2021 at 10:40 AM

Alexis, this describes the status of my mind almost every day! I love your imagery and the swirl of words you use, and easy to relate to, especially during covid when so many of the things we have come to take for granted have been tossed into a chaotic state. Big congratulations for your POTD honors, my friend. Enjoy your day! ~ John

Tania Kitchin

March 22, 2021 at 10:13 AM

Lovely Alexis, congratulations on POTD!

Constance La France

March 22, 2021 at 9:51 AM

Alex, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with this wonderful poem _Constance

Beryl Edmonds

March 22, 2021 at 9:17 AM

Congratulations on poem of the day Alexis, it happens to me too ~ Belle

Michelle Faulkner

March 22, 2021 at 8:42 AM

Back with congratulations on your POTD honor, Alexis, very well deserved!

Paula Goldsmith

March 22, 2021 at 8:37 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week.....................

Kim Merryman

March 22, 2021 at 8:26 AM

Congrats on POTD, Alexis! Blessings, Kim M.

L Milton Hankins

March 22, 2021 at 7:19 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Alexis!

David Kavanagh

March 22, 2021 at 6:57 AM

I like the Dichotomy here Alexis, for indeed a whirlwind seems chaotic, yet still retains its overall shape, a bit like our minds, congratulations on potd, cheers David