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Chaos

obscure thoughts invade my mind causing fragmented images to form into a whirlwind of chaos Alexis Y. 03/20/2021

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/10/2021 10:39:00 AM

Well written, Alexis, I feel your words. Congratulations on POTD!

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/30/2021 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful brevity, Alexis ~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/25/2021 5:52:00 AM

I’m late to the party. Congrats on POTD. I am fortunate to mostly sleep well but on occasion have had my own tornadoes interrupt my slumber. I feel bad for my sweetie whom is regularly afflicted. I hope your chaos dissipates and a calm spirit comes over you. Blessings Rick.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/24/2021 3:53:00 PM

Well done Alexis! Superb imagery that tells your story! Congratulations on your POTD. Short, sweet and very to the point! All the best. Blessings!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/23/2021 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Alexis on POTD. Very lovely!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/23/2021 2:15:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, Alexis. This is beautifully penned. Panagiota

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/22/2021 6:28:00 PM

Congratulations on potd my friend!! Awesome job!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/22/2021 5:37:00 PM

Hi Everyone, This poem getting chosen as a poem of the day was unexpected and surprising. Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/22/2021 12:32:00 PM

Congratulations for POTD Alexis :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/22/2021 11:44:00 AM

"Fragmented thoughts invade my mind" Causing... "A whirlwind of chaos" Sometimes, moments are out of control and we cannot do anything about it. When this happens, it is best to unscramble such thoughts and find the positive in there somewhere. Congratulations Alexis, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 11:32:00 AM

I think I can relate my friend, so glad to see you awarded with POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/22/2021 11:19:00 AM

Congrats on POTD! God bless you

John Watt

Date: 3/22/2021 10:40:00 AM

Alexis, this describes the status of my mind almost every day! I love your imagery and the swirl of words you use, and easy to relate to, especially during covid when so many of the things we have come to take for granted have been tossed into a chaotic state. Big congratulations for your POTD honors, my friend. Enjoy your day! ~ John

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/22/2021 10:13:00 AM

Lovely Alexis, congratulations on POTD!

Constance La France

Date: 3/22/2021 9:51:00 AM

Alex, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with this wonderful poem _Constance

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/22/2021 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on poem of the day Alexis, it happens to me too ~ Belle

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/22/2021 8:42:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your POTD honor, Alexis, very well deserved!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/22/2021 8:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week.....................

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/22/2021 8:26:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Alexis! Blessings, Kim M.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/22/2021 7:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, Alexis!

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/22/2021 6:57:00 AM

I like the Dichotomy here Alexis, for indeed a whirlwind seems chaotic, yet still retains its overall shape, a bit like our minds, congratulations on potd, cheers David