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My wait over in my thirty-ninth year when an old covet brought a life’s new lease, and on my first watch would elated stare upon nursling eyes shut in newborn peace. Thirty-nine years before first gazed my own - my tiny hands clutched in my father’s palms but that spirit was hidden and not shown and thus I shall spare you no such alarms. In your helpless lay, in first sleep of babes the future becomes yours, and now I trust I will feel its flame before my own fades and remember to wait if wait I must. Behold, a changing of the guard I see when I look at you looking back at me. Written: July 2004

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Date: 7/24/2024 9:30:00 PM
This is a beautiful story of beginning life. It speaks of love. Thanks for this poem.
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Date: 7/24/2024 5:31:00 AM
What a sweet sonnet welcoming a new life into the world. You really do have a cuddly side
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/24/2024 6:18:00 AM
There there. We're all multi-faceted personalities. It's okay
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 7/24/2024 5:35:00 AM
Arrggh!

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