Changing My Appearance

I'm not that old So, I'm told; yet My mold just changed

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/13/2022 8:09:00 PM

That's what happens these days -- ever since the good Lord started molding (us) with that cheap clay. lol. Good one, Charlie. :) gw

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2022 12:33:00 PM

what a great Than-bauk. I find this form rather a challenge!!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/12/2022 1:21:00 PM

We are far more than our bodies. But live in a society that honors youth, mainly. I’d prefer being near a warm fireplace than a shiny , cold stove. Thanks, fireplace! )); Pangie

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/12/2022 4:39:00 AM

Yes, I get it. I always say, the package is the same, just a little tattered!! Good One!

Charles Messina
Date: 12/12/2022 5:43:00 AM

Absolutely! Thanks, Mike.