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Changing Gears

They stole my brand-new bike from where I’d left it in the yard. Since I was only eight years old, I really took it hard. I’d only had it for a week But it fit all my needs – The brakes were on the handlebars And wow! It had three speeds! It was metallic blue and oh, The other kids would stare; But one day when I came outside, It simply wasn’t there. We searched in vain on every street Within the neighborhood. We really thought it would show up, But it was gone for good. My parents didn’t have the funds To purchase a replacement. Instead, they found a clunker Rusting in somebody’s basement. My second bike was old and slow And really not much fun. The tires were fat, the rims were scuffed, The count of speeds was one! I’ve never owned another bike But cars I’ve had a few; And one thing I can tell you is Each one was spanking new!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/1/2013 9:52:00 AM
A tale of woe I also know. Too short we had those bikes. It isn't right to take something just because we like. :( :)
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:55:00 PM
Ilene, , a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:23:00 AM
Ha! Funny but so sad...heartbreaking for a kid.
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:56:00 AM
love this, ilene, yes this runs so true, if we hard gears it was seen as a cut above. congrats of this wonderful entry. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 2:10:00 AM
Oh this so reminded me of my husband who had his shiny new chopper bike stolen the first time he took it out Congratulations Ilene xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:29:00 AM
ilene congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:40:00 PM
Yes, I remember this cutie. Congrats on your win, sweet lady.
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:37:00 PM
Sorry about your bicycle . Glad you can have new cars. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:28:00 PM
Perfect, I mean PERFECT cadence and rhyming! A most enjoyable piece. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:37:00 AM
ilene, I like this a lot, if for the contest, good luck..David
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Date: 5/1/2012 5:23:00 AM
heartwarming bike story, ilene... you got me!.. winning huggs!
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Date: 4/30/2012 8:55:00 PM
you are so awesome. YOu always tell a rhyming tale so WELL. loved it.
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Date: 4/30/2012 6:09:00 PM
I love this poem Ilene...sorry about your bike....best wishes for the contest...Joseph
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Date: 4/30/2012 3:53:00 PM
Excellent flow and rhythm of this one..Enjoyed the topic and the mood of the work..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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