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Changing

The clouds circle around in blue sky
Continuing to hide the sun
Raindrops come and go today
A changing pattern stays
Locked in place for now
The breeze does start
Then it stops
Fickle
Day

Heidi Sands

8/13/17

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Dean Wood Date: 8/14/2017 12:07:00 PM Another fun form. I need to get busy and try some of these. I really like this poem, it flows easily and ends perfectly! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/14/2017 12:22:00 PM Yes! I usually have to be in the mood to try new forms of poetry. But, the more I do, lately, the more I enjoy it. So, I am going through the forms trying them. I like this form. I hope to see you do some, Dean. Thank you!

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/14/2017 8:52:00 AM Fickle day indeed that gave birth to a glorious Nonet dear, Heidi! Beautiful! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/14/2017 9:14:00 AM Nice to see you Demetrios. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey Date: 8/14/2017 4:31:00 AM This is such a beautiful write my friend! I know of days like this, those that are changing all the time, from rain to sun and back to rain again! This poem exemplifies this perfectly Heidi! What a lovely piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/14/2017 8:02:00 AM Yes, there have been plenty of these type days this summer. Thank you for your positive feedback on this Russell :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/13/2017 4:23:00 PM Some days are like that in the summer with those scattered showers but some cloud cover does help reduce the heat..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/13/2017 4:28:00 PM Yes, that's true to Sara. Thank you :)

Akkina Downing Date: 8/13/2017 2:32:00 PM Exactly how earlier today was. Luckily though at noon it changes to a beautiful sunny afternoon. Very nice Miss Heidi, I enjoyed it a lot :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/13/2017 2:33:00 PM Hi Akkina. I am happy your day turned into a beautiful sunny afternoon. It is turning out that way here too. Thank you :)

Edward Ibeh Date: 8/13/2017 2:01:00 PM Loved this nonet, Heidi. Wrote my poem "Love Is Special In So Many Ways" in this form. I'll try another one soon... Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/13/2017 2:11:00 PM Hi Edward. Thank you . I just took a look at your Nonet, too. You did very well with that! I hope you do try another one soon :)