Changing

The clouds circle around in blue sky Continuing to hide the sun Raindrops come and go today A changing pattern stays Locked in place for now The breeze does start Then it stops Fickle Day Heidi Sands 8/13/17

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Dean Wood

Date: 8/14/2017 12:07:00 PM

Another fun form. I need to get busy and try some of these. I really like this poem, it flows easily and ends perfectly!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 12:22:00 PM

Yes! I usually have to be in the mood to try new forms of poetry. But, the more I do, lately, the more I enjoy it. So, I am going through the forms trying them. I like this form. I hope to see you do some, Dean. Thank you!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/14/2017 8:52:00 AM

Fickle day indeed that gave birth to a glorious Nonet dear, Heidi! Beautiful!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 9:14:00 AM

Nice to see you Demetrios. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2017 4:31:00 AM

This is such a beautiful write my friend! I know of days like this, those that are changing all the time, from rain to sun and back to rain again! This poem exemplifies this perfectly Heidi! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/14/2017 8:02:00 AM

Yes, there have been plenty of these type days this summer. Thank you for your positive feedback on this Russell :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2017 4:23:00 PM

Some days are like that in the summer with those scattered showers but some cloud cover does help reduce the heat..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 4:28:00 PM

Yes, that's true to Sara. Thank you :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/13/2017 2:32:00 PM

Exactly how earlier today was. Luckily though at noon it changes to a beautiful sunny afternoon. Very nice Miss Heidi, I enjoyed it a lot :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 2:33:00 PM

Hi Akkina. I am happy your day turned into a beautiful sunny afternoon. It is turning out that way here too. Thank you :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/13/2017 2:09:00 PM

Hi Heidi , lovely write , we have a lot of days like that here in Ireland ::)))hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 2:12:00 PM

Interesting to hear that Niall. I have often thought about visiting there one day. Thank you :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/13/2017 2:01:00 PM

Loved this nonet, Heidi. Wrote my poem "Love Is Special In So Many Ways" in this form. I'll try another one soon...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/13/2017 2:11:00 PM

Hi Edward. Thank you . I just took a look at your Nonet, too. You did very well with that! I hope you do try another one soon :)