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change, can come with a lot of changes
like maintenance gotta be patient
Do I know what im facin
i just got to embrace it
and hold life deep within me
even when im empty
and people are condesending
I adapt and amend
and apprehended a friend
who recommened the commitment of tying up loose ends
i hope god forgives me for all of my new sins
and separate me from my angel and devil blend
who will i be what will i see in the end
please prevent me from traveling back for revenge
but my mind can always change RIGHT?
kuz my pops said that changes always change LIFE

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Date: 7/16/2016 7:29:00 PM
Wow! I really enjoyed reading your first poem, it definitely makes me stay focused on lovely things because I certainly don't want to travel back for revenge; well written. Welcome
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Date: 7/16/2016 12:17:00 AM
GhoSt St. Patrick, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/15/2016 4:05:00 AM
Ghost St Pfatrick, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I feel as if you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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