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A fictional write inspired by a conversation I had with a friend. A similar situation like this happened to her. However, I used my imagination and the conversation inspired a whole poem. My poem centers around what can one learn/gain from such a scenario?

 


 

There was a certain guy who appeared 
to be homeless and asking for food. But 
the odd thing is he had a sign, but it was 
off to the side, and he wasn't holding it. 
I thought to myself,” Shouldn't he at least 
be holding  the sign up if he's going to be 
looking for a handout? The nerve of him.”
Walking a little closer, I saw what the sign 
actually said, WILL WORK FOR FOOD. 
I'm a retired Vet with the United States 
Army. Any work will do. I'm at your service. 
Guilt came over me real fast. I needed to 
thank him for his service. Instead, I judged 
him too swiftly. Although I was ashamed for 
jumping to conclusions about his story, 
my view on life changed that day. Because
I came across a brave and honorable man. 
That helped me, by causing my outlook on
life to change drastically. These days I'm not
so quick to judge folks by what I think I see.
















Alexis Y.
12-15-2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/16/2020 4:11:00 AM
Ahhh!! A touching work. We have no idea what he could have been going through after maybe serving in a war torn area. It is easy to judge but hard to really understand another person. Thanks for visiting my page with congrats. Sara
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Date: 12/16/2020 3:04:00 AM
I agree with you, opinions are easily made by the looks of things and people, We'd be well aware if it was us on the other side, thank you for highlighting this issue dear poet friend, you have a blessed day, love and light, Alexis dear.
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Date: 12/16/2020 1:43:00 AM
A good lesson to learn from your friend. Unfortunately there are many who judge rashly and just go on with their lives. ~~
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Date: 12/15/2020 6:44:00 PM
Life brings us lessons as we find that things are not always what they seem..
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Date: 12/15/2020 6:39:00 PM
Good for you, Alexis. This poem is a great tribute to the power of the human spirit. Faith and Hope, Gershon
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Date: 12/15/2020 2:28:00 PM
I think it is human nature to judge. Don't judge yourself to harshly. A good write to cause one to ponder our biases. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit.
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Date: 12/15/2020 11:36:00 AM
You should have learnt from Trump that Americans are not honest! Viet Nam vets litter the streets who never left the USA - nor served in the military! There are numerous organisations to assist genuine vets! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 12/15/2020 11:15:00 AM
Bless. we have all done this at some time or other .I know this came from a good humble heart.So sad about the mans disposition. touched my heart this one. well done.
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Date: 12/15/2020 9:33:00 AM
They say first impressions last, but I believe they can change in a flash, as you prove here with this wonderful write Alexis. I hope that any honourable man in the same situation is successful in their search for work and never goes hungry again. Bless you, Belle
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