Change One Thing

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Written: March 04, 2024 For Tom Woody Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If there was one thing I could rearrange, In this vast and mysterious range. I would heal the scars of rivalry and distress, And shine a light on progress and its success. If there was something I could do, To modify our view of the world anew. We judge, detest, and fear things too fast, And failure to grasp a benediction seems shaft. We're quite conscious of our dichotomy, And fail to realize that we desire autonomy. We must collocate to avoid extinction, And strive for a world free of any affliction. I wish we could suggest a single word, I'd identify "kindness" as syntax is blurred. As humans, we all share similar dreams, Welded world without walls, warm streams. A simple act, a smile, a hand extended, A world where judgment is suspended. We will handle any situation with care, We might have had enhanced prayer. We'd gaze upon life with each other's eyes, And we would recognize our shared advice. One nation would reunite across one Monde, We ought to live in peace and love, under God. I'd sing of oneness in all voices at every age, A song pledged to shatter every stage. No further strife, no longer hate, Just a symphony of love, sealing our fate. If there was just one dream to come true, I'd dream of a world where dreams renew. Where every child can laugh and play, And hope shines brighter every day.

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/7/2024 3:57:00 AM

How kind and beautiful this is, I absolutely love your rhymes and cadence of this very well woven poem, that depicts what you wish to change. i agree , we are all connected somehow as we all wish for kindness and true just a smile can change so much. and i wish and dream too of a world with no hatred and children would all smile and not face adversity. How heartfelt are your wishes woven seamlessly! Impeccable and philanthropic write! Soulfully divine! Pleasure reading you dr sotto! BOL

Valsa George

Date: 3/7/2024 3:15:00 AM

I must say you are 'greedy'! Instead of one thing, you are asking for too many things and you want to see change effected in very many areas..... :) But you have distilled all your whims into one....! You wish to see our world turned into a place where kindness and love prevail. If this is achieved all other things will be added to it, or fall in place ! A delightfully humane view of life so powerfully and beautifully expressed. All the Best dear friend.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/5/2024 4:17:00 PM

SP, a very nice view of a possible world. We are wondering how we will get to the point where we all work together.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/5/2024 2:23:00 PM

People unified in goals would be a great thing. This poem resonates with my heart. I'm thankful.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2024 6:26:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me. I haven't checked out the contest though. Thanks for sharing it with us and don't we all wish for better for our homes, communities, our states, and our world. An earth that needs healing. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/5/2024 5:48:00 AM

Endearing thoughts my friend. Quite a meaningful poem, Lasaad.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/5/2024 5:18:00 AM

your poem was powerful and optimistic in your expression of what you'd change. Each line and each verse were uplifting and. I share each of your sentiments deep within my heart and soul. I wholeheartedly agree with 'kindness' being the operative word in all matters. Seeing through another's eyes encourages empathy and compassion, which are sadly lacking in today's world. I ponder, "How did we get here?" Your poem ignited a host of thoughts, dear Sotto. Thank you. your poetess friend, Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 3/4/2024 9:18:00 PM

Nice thoughts. I wish they come true.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/4/2024 6:58:00 PM

"I'd sing of oneness in all voices at every age, A song pledged to shatter every stage. No further strife, no longer hate, Just a symphony of love, sealing our fate" My favorite lines! Lots of deep thoughts in this one! Well done.Best wishes in the contest.