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Change in Our Weather

We fell in love, the way the leaves began to change. It was beautiful at first, changing together, dancing and falling wistfully to the ground. Autumn chills then winter cold set in and we covered peacefully in a film of white dust.
                                 Frozen together,
                Spring came to thaw, and that's when
                             We started drowning.







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Date: May 1, 2019

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Date: 5/7/2019 6:40:00 AM
Wow a stormy piece. Powerful imagery, Briauna.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:23:00 PM
There was definitely a storm brewing with this one, thank you for you kind comment!
Date: 5/4/2019 7:30:00 AM
Did not see that ending! Congrats Briauna--a very clever poem.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:21:00 PM
Sadly, neither did I! Thank you!
Date: 5/3/2019 9:02:00 PM
Oh, your poem is exquisite in its emotional imagery, Briauna. Simply beautiful, I love the title and where this piece took my imagination. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! I'm very glad you liked it!
Date: 5/3/2019 6:51:00 AM
I've just read all your poems here. I think this one is my favorite... but it's close. Very nicely done. I hope you will be submitting more.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/3/2019 2:28:00 PM
I am also very fond of this poem. It sat in the 'notes' on my phone for a couple years before I finally decided share it. Not sure why, other than it was... special... in some way. Thank you for you comment!