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There are people in my life That are still trying to control me Attention folks - I'm 88 years old There are still people to try it But my will is very strong This is my serious attempt at change Trust me I WILL SUCCEED

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Date: 3/22/2024 1:26:00 AM
And you will succeed, because you really are strong! I'm so proud of your strength and your resilience. You keep inspiring me. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/8/2024 12:08:00 PM
Hello Happy jack, Don't let anyone control you. You are strong. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2024 3:12:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, Your welcome my friend Jack. Love. From Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/8/2024 12:47:00 PM
Thank you for the moral support my dear friend Darlene! Love from a friend!
Date: 3/8/2024 5:53:00 AM
oh wow! Powerful words. In my experience some people want to control others because they have no control over themselves...ironic, I'd say. Powerful set of words. Have a splendid day, dearest Jack!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/8/2024 6:17:00 AM
"they have no control over themselves" well said dear Sara! xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/8/2024 6:14:00 AM
A family member... I will say no more!!!!!! Love from the north! xxx

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