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Chance Visitor

A poem is a chance visitor Who barges in unexpected But when waiting for his arrival He may not show up A guest with no propriety Feb.2.2023 Bite size Contest. No.60. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/30/2023 2:28:00 PM

I like this one Valsa - Poetry surprises me often as it feels slightly delivered rather than already part of you.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/8/2023 4:21:00 PM

Very true, Valsa, well written short verse. We should write when it comes to us. Putting it off may be an opportunity gone by. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through you lovely poetry my dear friend. A poet friend in Texas Bill

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/3/2023 11:40:00 AM

Valsa, I'll think of this clever litter jewel the next time I'm driving down the road and~~Boom! Lines of poetry take over my mind, then are simply not there later. Janice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/2/2023 6:52:00 PM

Nice description of 'that ornery character,' the poem. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/2/2023 7:59:00 AM

Love it, amen indeed, as with Christ we look everywhere but within for Him to show up

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/2/2023 6:53:00 AM

Very eloquently said, Valsa. Your bite-size poetry is excellent. The creative intellect is susceptible to every jolt.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/2/2023 6:15:00 AM

Muse has its moods--well said, Valsa. Best to you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2023 5:58:00 AM

Oh! So true, Valsa:) very good one:)

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/2/2023 5:41:00 AM

The poetic mind, subject to every tremor...Love it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/2/2023 4:23:00 AM

Hummmm!! I need to think about this one because I can't decide about what might show up to take the poem's place. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me because it left me with a question. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/2/2023 12:52:00 AM

When in need, my poems go walk about. Valsa, yet wake me up in the middle of the night, scribbling away on my pad of a note book...Harry

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 2/2/2023 12:40:00 AM

Your bite-size poem is fabulous. Best for a win.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/1/2023 11:30:00 PM

Very well thought of Valsa! Here's a warm hello from Florida...ab