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Very true, Valsa, well written short verse. We should write when it comes to us. Putting it off may be an opportunity gone by. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through you lovely poetry my dear friend. A poet friend in Texas Bill

Valsa, I'll think of this clever litter jewel the next time I'm driving down the road and~~Boom! Lines of poetry take over my mind, then are simply not there later. Janice

Nice description of 'that ornery character,' the poem. Sweetness and Light, Gershon

Love it, amen indeed, as with Christ we look everywhere but within for Him to show up

Very eloquently said, Valsa. Your bite-size poetry is excellent. The creative intellect is susceptible to every jolt.

Muse has its moods--well said, Valsa. Best to you.

Oh! So true, Valsa:) very good one:)

The poetic mind, subject to every tremor...Love it!

Hummmm!! I need to think about this one because I can't decide about what might show up to take the poem's place. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me because it left me with a question. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

When in need, my poems go walk about. Valsa, yet wake me up in the middle of the night, scribbling away on my pad of a note book...Harry

Your bite-size poem is fabulous. Best for a win.

Very well thought of Valsa! Here's a warm hello from Florida...ab