Chance



The misty murky forest deep
Forewarned his frantic finding flight
A chance to search without a peep
The misty murky forest deep
The only chance her heart to keep
Was finding her to make it right
The misty murky forest deep
Forewarned his frantic finding flight

courageforgivenesshopelonginglovetriolet

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Paula Goldsmith

January 30, 2023 at 11:32 AM

I enjoyed your "Chance" write. Watch out for "The misty murky forest deep." Don't know what one may find. Have a great day............

Andy Chunn

February 5, 2023 at 2:05 PM

Thanks for you input. Your support is most appreciated!

Joanna Daniel

January 19, 2023 at 7:04 PM

This has a sinister charm to it, wondering what would happen to the search, Andy:)

Andy Chunn

January 22, 2023 at 2:45 PM

Thanks Jo....not sure what would have happened!

Jeff Kyser

January 14, 2023 at 5:04 AM

This is terrific, Andy. I'm generally not a fan of the repetitiveness of the triolet, but it really works well here to my ears anyway, lol. I very much like how the opener is personified and then objectified.

Andy Chunn

January 17, 2023 at 3:47 PM

Thanks Jeff....I really appreciate your input. Not generally a fan myself but....well you know. Thanks again.