Gary Fields Poet Pastoral

Champion Among All Revisited

Who ever knew
That to crucify Him on the Cross
             That day'
Would revive the people
        And make them pray
A crutch for the absent
Just another miracle
      For that day'
All of God's people answered
              Fore
Christ had carried the day
       Never-The-Less
Their were so many people
Who had seem to have lost their way'
They were weeping with sorrow
As though there was no tomorrow
They wept and they prayed
Till death did them part
But on the third day, He had arisen
And yes, resurrection was part
Fore He was,
To be, the Lord Almighty

GF

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Ned Flanders May 25, 2011 at 1:51 PM Much much better, this could and should be shouted from a pulpit..enjoyed.

Carol Sunshine Brown May 25, 2011 at 1:37 PM Oh yes Gary it does look and sound so much better. Sometimes we need to step back and take a second or third look at what we have written. And read it aloud there is the real tell all. You did a great job Gary. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol