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Author's Notes: "Champagne in Heaven is a Canzone that I completed orginally on January 9, 2018. This is the fourth Canzone I've written that follows the original poetic tradition of this particular format, as a precursor to the Italian and English sonnets that are more common today. The Canzone was significantly influenced by both Francesco Petrarca (or Petrarch) and Dante Alighieri. The version structure of this Canzone consists of "One Stanza" rendered in 14 verses (although Canzone writes can be longer too, up to 20 verses or more and set in Iambic Pentameter or Hexameter, depending on your preference). I kept this write in "Open Meter" this time. My purpose with this poem was to consider the prospect of, or a situation, whereby one might consider the possibility of "Champagne" being served in Heaven. In the poem, a new soul who has freshly ascended to Heaven, serves as my protagonist who takes it upon himself to test this humorous proposition. It was a lot of fun putting this one together!! I hope you find it equally interesting and entertaining!! With that, here's to a glass of "Heavenly Old Bubbly."

Rhyme Scheme: aabbccddeeffgg

Categories: allegory, angel, god, heaven, humor, metaphor, and symbolism.

Champagne In Heaven

Champagne in Heaven

The “Old Bubbly” I hopeth one day in Heaven to see!
And why, pray tell, should I not ever wish this to be?
Methinks that God would smile at this artful prospect,
Yet, such an occurrence may make His Angels suspect!
If His Angels protest, I shall plead my wish to God’s action, 
Whilst spoiling not to argue my case with all due passion!
I am quite sure my plea may ruffle proper saintly tradition,
But, I shall ask God’s indulgence and seek not His perdition!
I know God granted an Irish soul’s plea for nips of Irish dew,
And so, I am sure He’ll allow my “Bubbly” in Heaven’s pew!
If my request meets with Almighty God’s just and fair favor,
I’ll ask Him to join me in few stout nips of dew of Irish flavor!
										
Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved,
January 9, 2018 (Canzone)

Author’s Note: Deus est qui regit omnia! Amen! Amen!

Canzone Structural Notes:
One Stanza
14 Verses
137 Words
Open Meter
Rhyme Scheme: aabbccddeeffgg
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Mcdaid Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 9:22 AM
the bubbles sure burst in this excellent pen gary with taste of the old irish dew smiling
Bateman Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 11:37 AM
But, of course -- Liam Mate!! Remember, I too, have a share of Irish blood and whiskey both coursing through my veins!! LOL!! Champagne and Irish Whiskey in Heaven -- what a "Heavenly Thought" that is!! Best Wishes, Gary
Ashley Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:57 PM
A very intriguing and creative poem Gary with such captivating content; 'Champagne in Heaven' such a heavenly idea so beautifully expressed :)) I enjoyed your excellent write my friend! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Bateman Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Hello Susan!! Thanks for your wondrous comment here. I'm very pleased that you like this Canzone selection of mine on "Champagne in Heaven." This one was actually a theme that had been on my mind for quite a while. Sometimes the type of poetic form used ends up making all the difference. (I need to check out you poems again very soon.) I know you've been writing some really great poems Susan!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Loughman Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Excellent format Gary and and excellent write..I hope they have Champagne in Heaven:-)
Bateman Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Donna!! Me Too -- I hope they have Champagne (and Whiskey) both in Heaven. I would at least like to think and hope to think that the Almighty has a sense of humor. LOL!! Cheers and Best, Gary
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:25 AM
A creative imagination to write a very good poem in a restricted form.. This is one of best Canzone poems I have read..
Bateman Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:42 PM
Hello SO!! Thanks for your great comment here. I'm very pleased you liked this particular Canzone. (The other three earlier Canzones I've posted follow the same critical standard and construction. Give them a read, if you have the time.) Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:09 AM
- His angels will not protest, they love pink Champagne .... that's why they always smile and give you a soothing feeling :) - When it comes to Irish Whiskey I think you have to talk to God .... the angels do not like Whiskey :) - Love it, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Thanks for you read here and for your enlightened comment. Pink Champagne, eh?? Okay, got the thing with the Angels, but I'll be more than happy to negotiate directly with God for the distinct pleasure of drinking some very fine Irish Whiskey!! (The Leprechauns made me say that -- LOL!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
Pandit Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 5:07 PM
This is such a creative thought Gary. The urge in poem will convince God to grant your request. I'm glad you posted your notes about the form...though your words sufficiently inform. One Irish brew I have always loved, is Guinness beer...It tastes so much better in Ireland..it may be just the way they pour it...cheers!
Bateman Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 5:17 PM
Thanks Vijay for your very gracious comments here!! I did give this one some thought to make something that had a light-hearted approach in addressing a theme like this one. It would be nice, of course, if what I've written about would/could be an option in the Great After Life. I guess we all shall one day see!! Yes, I like Guinness too, very much. And with the Irish Dew, as mentioned, I'm quite fond of good Irish Whiskey too. Guinness, Irish Whiskey, and Champagne might be all in order in Heaven. Let us pray!! Best Always, Gary
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