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Champagne Flowing

Smooth-limbed creatures list wayward in passion's grip Romantic interludes, the menu fare of their cruise ship The Captain, tuxedo-attired, dazzles the admiring throng Green-eyed maidens swoon his way the evening long Stars wink to one another on high, knowing nods Raising waves higher, the pale moon their demi-god ~ Champagne flowing throughout Night's grand facade

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 7:02:00 AM

It sounds like a heavenly voyage on a cruise ship that knows how to make a lovely vacation even more lovely!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/21/2019 11:31:00 AM

Sounds good to me!!! Thanks, Caren. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/20/2019 12:37:00 AM

The captain of a ship in a tuxedo would certainly be the catch of the day, and I'm certain he could pick and choose from his admiring throng of swooning green eyed maidens! A cruise ship is just for fun and happy times! Great description of this type of voyage and a lovely flow of rhyme Gershon. Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/20/2019 8:30:00 AM

Thank you for taking this cruise and for your enthusiastic review of this poem. Appreciated! :) gw