06.08.2023
In rhythmic pouring and accumulation of polished tears cold against the cheek Moments of uncertain time as ash and dust A buttery sun burned hope - light gradually disappeared lost its precious lustre Broke the harmonious bond of the power of love scentless greenhouse orchids we are all chameleons - can't ignore
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