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Chameleon Syndrome

chameleon syndrome- perpetual changes where e'er wind blows.... Note: For Chris' "Yet Another Senryu Contest"

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Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/23/2010 2:18:00 AM

Nicely done, Audrey. You wouldn't necessarily think of a chameleon and the wind in the same way. Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/21/2010 6:27:00 AM

congrats Audrey, on this winner, wonderful poem. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "Not Another Senyru Contest!". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2010 10:52:00 PM

Cool name for that syndrome, Audrey . Congrats on your big win!!

Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2010 4:10:00 PM

Lovely poem, I feel sometimes like the chameleon, always changing.. congrats on your win, and thanks for commenting on my poetry

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/20/2010 3:02:00 PM

Clever use of the chameleon..congrats on your win. BG

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/20/2010 2:51:00 PM

Nice senryu! Although it is about nature in its way. I used to have a pet chameleon. They are amazing creatures. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/20/2010 2:45:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu, congratulations on a well deserved win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2010 1:56:00 PM

Congratulations, Audrey! I knew this one would do well! It's great to be sharing the second spot with you and Carrie. Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 9/20/2010 1:28:00 PM

Awesome title Audrey for an awesome Senyru. I'm so glad this GEM hit the winners podium. Go girl >> James :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/20/2010 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Audrey

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/20/2010 12:43:00 PM

logical, Congrad's Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/20/2010 12:26:00 PM

Hi Audrey-- super congrats on your win-- I really like the idea of this, using the chameleon ;)-- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2010 11:48:00 AM

Congrats my BBF on your super win in the Senryu contest.. awesome victory ..enjoy with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/20/2010 10:21:00 AM

love it, congrats on your win in the contest

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 9/18/2010 1:24:00 PM

Chameleon Syndrome is a great line. Sounds like a title for a pop thriller like Ludlum or such. How are you?! How is Jimmy??? You are always so kind and nice. Thank you so much for that! Love, Gerard

David Smalling

Date: 9/17/2010 4:10:00 AM

Change, change, our hopes and our fear The wind blows to your poem dear And I just want to cheer

John Rhinem

Date: 9/16/2010 4:10:00 PM

Smile ~ Which my eyes have ever beheld but, surely fitting towards the contest course ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'Your Beauty Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Blessed & Beautiful of Evenings 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey,' Amid The Spectacularly Colourful Leaves of, 'An Autumns Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Audrey Carey!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 9/16/2010 3:58:00 PM

Smile ~ Seems a bit more colourful amid a different type of spin my dear but, I am not a participent nor am I a judge so, what do I do ~ I hope that "Your Beauties" day is & has been going so very wonderfully for "Your Many Splendors Dear Lady" &, it is "Always Such A Joy," to gather near anything that "Your Beautiful Soul" does brush although, this is not the most pleasant of paintings I would have say of "Your Treasures" ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 9/16/2010 3:49:00 PM

Smile ~ First I wish to say that I truly "I Love You Dear" & secondly, I am not sure if I shall tomorrow? Smile, now would that fit into the metaphoric catagory of a Chameleon? Smile, "How Are 'You Beautiful Audrey Carey,' Whom Has 'Such A Very Beautiful Soul;' Well 'I Sooo Deeply Hope!!!'" ~ I really like this poem compared to the few I have seen thus far in regards it seems unto the contest for, although they all have been penned very well this "Pearls Creation of Your Own" ~ ....Cont:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:36:00 PM

Hit the nail on the head my BBF with this awesome piece.. good luck in Chris's contest luv... hope all is well with u..we are having a lovely week... gorgeous weather ..more gorgeous luv...luv..

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/15/2010 12:02:00 PM

Very nice! I enjoyed the read, good luck in the contest. Caryl

James Peranteau

Date: 9/15/2010 11:12:00 AM

Hey Audrey, how are you ! This my friendly poet is a great Senryu. ty for reading me and sharing your poem ! james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2010 10:18:00 AM

It was pleasure to read your poetry today Audrey. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 8:11:00 AM

Very cool approach to the contest, Audrey. Beware those whose colors change! Great entry! Chris picked a terrific, inspiring theme, didn't he? Wishing you success in the contest. (You spelled chameleon correctly in the poem - check the title) Love, Carolyn