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Chalk Full of Great Lines

The body has been removed
To my place of sanctified worship
Where all is quiet and piano soothing
I am Ernesto Cortazar
Your Coroner and host for the evening
Here is my creation and story
In the docket I bask in my glory!






She in her balcony
The opera on their dram of the second half
If only she knew
She to be
Behind the curtains with me
The final act of the soiree

The expression she gave oh screaming pleas
As I slit her throat in a lustful three
The blood of our love
Gushing and gushing for only me
Her love and bloods devotion
Only chalk lines point now to me

The detective goes "Ernesto"
Another like all the ones before
I smile and fain sadness
Yes detective, any tell tale signs?
None that I can see Ernesto
He seems to be a silent one
A ghost who comes and goes
With no humanity or heart to show

Are the chalk lines all drawn detective?
Yes Ernesto, you may take possession of the body now
I whisper "I have taken possession long before you arrived senior"
I and the detective play the same dance
He is mystified at these crimes
As the blood of love dances, drop by drop, into my mouth

She is with me now
Alone and with our coronary desires
She is cold, and silent, and icy
Welcoming my final intrusions
The dance of the dead
Her blood drained
I drink the wine of my lustful crime
I so enjoy the mystery
As they all stare
At my beautiful chalk lines

She was all of nineteen
She was always mine
I Ernesto
Drank the rubies blood wine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/28/2016 7:00:00 PM
Beautifully written thanks for sharing.....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:54:00 PM
I was in the docket, I was forced to share it!!!!
Date: 8/28/2016 5:24:00 PM
You have silently crossed over to the dark side with this poem Arthur and I LOVE it! ENCORE ENCORE:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2016 5:27:00 PM
I live on the dark side! :)
Date: 8/28/2016 5:04:00 PM
Amazing piece Arthur...outlined to perfection
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 7:54:00 PM
You mean amazing piano piece right? :)
Date: 8/28/2016 8:01:00 AM
Wowzer, disturbing completed to perfection Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thank you, I had my Agatha Christie dress on when I wrote this!
Date: 8/28/2016 5:41:00 AM
Ohhh... what a good story with a twisted twist of a man being the killer and detective. "I so enjoy the mystery as they all stare at at my beautiful chalk lines" what a complete artist... enjoyed.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:55:00 PM
The chalk Artist!!
Date: 8/28/2016 2:43:00 AM
A full bodied extravaganza of 'the darkside of poetry'. Dripping with drama, gore and a 'wink' of mystery, this is some serious writing Arthur..a veritable late night feast to be savored. Excellent write :-) blessings, lynn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 8:56:00 PM
Why thank you so much, did I mention, I have added you to the payroll? Hugs!
Date: 8/28/2016 2:10:00 AM
Interview with a Vaso.... rich and dark work of an evening, Arthur. A fine write. regards, Viv
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2016 7:54:00 PM
Thank you Viv, fun doing the dark ones!

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