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Cessation

Tinted colors of old Debauched, dubious mysteries Finagled corrupt's gold A glorious, poignant history An empty throne, And tales of skirmish Standing draped in gold, all alone A war cry and a death wish Glorious structures, Secluded with pride Curtained with greed and power A broken ruling mind Sky turning grey Chains broken for freedom Nobility burned like hay End of the golden demon. © Rohan Suresh

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Skat A

Date: 2/26/2016 10:33:00 PM

Rohaan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/27/2016 10:43:00 AM

Thank you so much SKAT. I feel so blessed (the title of my next poem, still in making ;p). I too hope I meet wonderful people like you! World would be a better place if people like you where more in it. About myself. What can I say. I am a kid trying to make a career in English with a dream to travel the world and write about natural beauty and meet amazing people like you. I love reading and writing..And I state the obvious..And I love getting hugs!!! ;P hugs back. Love you SKAT. Gonna go and read your posts!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/25/2016 2:18:00 PM

Hi Rohaan,, You should never judge a person or name by its cover. For the ugliest flower can be the rarest and beautiful of all in the inside :) By the way, This is my way of welcoming the new poets. I value all on the same level. However, I have become good friends to many here. I am honest in my welcome to you. If for some reason you want constructive criticism, without getting offended then you have to be clear about it on your poems. We are a group and many are sensitive. I follow and read the poetry of those who want feedback. And the only way to get that around here is -read to receive. :) Thank you for the reply. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/26/2016 9:50:00 AM

Ha, so are you...going to check if you have a new poem....

Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/26/2016 6:01:00 AM

Okay. Noted. Thanks for replying. You are a good human being ma'am.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2016 1:32:00 PM

Rohaan, Welcome to Poetry soup I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Other than that I will read, enjoy and comment with positive feedback. Remember, keep posting, stay in touch, TAP my shoulder when you have a new poem. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. You might find my support addictive. I've been a SOUP Poet for 6 years. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. I'm from Texas, How about you? Tell me a little about your poetic skills. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/25/2016 12:31:00 AM

Well I am flattered. Maybe this is your moral obligation to greet everyone like this but I find it really refreshing. I do hope you criticize me for the mistakes I made for I am just a kid and want someone to throw me some light. I did see your name but seeing your username I got scared. Well..thanks for such a warm welcome. I like you already!