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Cerulean Mood

Written: March 16, 2025, for a contest Sponsored By Cobstance la France

Quote: Like the sun, show mercy, and like the night, hide others' flaws.   Give like water and be humble like the earth. Be who you appear. By Poet

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Peachy snowbells drift on the twilight-lit lake, 
their rippling motions mirror the luster of silk.
Its grace lingers, fades, and is as elusive as a flake,
the ethereal charm of wonder is an everlasting ilk.
A cerulean mood settles into the doldrum,
adrift and lost, wiping blues, missing a cold rum.

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Howard Kerr March 21, 2025 at 3:38 AM Sotto Poet, This monumental majestic poem has been duly acknowledged for being such an immaculate discourse on its selected theme Congratulations Howard

Beata Agustin March 21, 2025 at 2:29 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Terry Miller March 20, 2025 at 9:07 AM Beautiful image and language, congratulations

thriveni c mysore March 20, 2025 at 6:41 AM rum. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Krishnanand Guptar March 19, 2025 at 11:25 PM Heartiest congratulations, dear poet, on your top win in this poetry contest with a very beautiful write. "Its grace lingers, fades, and is as elusive as a flake, the ethereal charm of wonder is an everlasting ilk." is so graceful. Wish you a pleasant day.

Paige Hind March 19, 2025 at 11:22 PM Wow- I love your language use here. Magic. :)

Paula Goldsmith March 19, 2025 at 3:18 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your "cerulean mood" write again. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Valsa George March 19, 2025 at 5:10 AM Snowbells are so beautiful when seen by the side of a lake or reflected in the stillness of a lake. Such a scene will wipe away our blues. Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick March 17, 2025 at 4:13 PM Good one for the contest. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I like the accompanying picture as well. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough March 17, 2025 at 4:10 PM This is a lingering softness of words that places me at the shore of a lake. Truthfully, I do not know what a peachy snowball is. Perhaps a flower? It doesn't matter, the overall picture is entertaining.

Victor Buhagiar March 17, 2025 at 2:25 AM Beautiful and evocative poem with a tinge of bittersweet emotion. Perfect rhythm and excellent imagery. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith March 16, 2025 at 1:49 PM I love your "cerulean mood" short write. What a pretty/cute/fun/colorful bird picture. Great Quote... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed way writing away...........