Cerise Celeste

Do i see pictorial echo's of love 

in hues of pink? upon a heavenly ceiling,

 dramatic as the verse instructed from 

an eternity of muse's, conveyed in cloud valleys

 under their thunder headed bluffs 

outlined by faded magenta 

and rising in coloums of power 

or sense it within my need for colourful scenes

as light the the reflection of ashes grey

shadow my solitude, and daylight hours

 no! i know it is.! & within its silver sheening come..  

(from celestial realms,) this reflection of heavens flowers.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/9/2013 9:50:00 PM
Just came by this favorite one of mine again that you wrote!! thanks for stopping by my latest post!
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Date: 12/27/2012 8:13:00 PM
reviewing this one of yours I had enjoyed in the past. Love the colors in it, joe!! thanks for all your comments thru the year. you are a good SOUPER.
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Date: 6/10/2012 11:45:00 AM
Joe, you captured some awesome imagery in this gem of yours.. Hope you are having a great weekend :) love Wilma
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:48:00 PM
A poignant write, Joe! Oh, I'm not so sleepy this time 'round!:) Sometimes within this "shadow my solitude" one can vividly see "this reflection of heavens flowers". A profoundly intense piece, Joe! Best wishes to you and yours! Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:06:00 PM
A very intense star gazing session, Joe? Possibly the Aurora Borealis. Sounds delightful! I'll come back tomorrow when my thoughts haven't been ousted by my need to sleep. Best to you, Joe!! Mikki
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:12:00 PM
I am stopping by just to thank you Joe, for your kind comment and also to ask you to continue with your writing endeavors. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:46:00 PM
Creative and very lovely Joe.. celestial realms are intriguing to me .. wonderful entry if u put in Rick's contest luv.. good luck..
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Date: 1/29/2011 8:29:00 PM
You have painted a vivid picture with your words. Good presentation.
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Date: 1/29/2011 6:58:00 PM
Wow, Joe, I hope you entered this one in the Pink Sky contest. It's magnificent and very original. Awesome imagery, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2011 6:08:00 PM
Gosh, how did I miss this one? Wonderful imagery from you, joe. Good luck in the contest. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:30:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed..If for the contest, good luck..Sara
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