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Cerebral Cortex of My Heart

I hold myself a prisoner A captive taciturn Unspeakable enticement still yearning Since coming of age to discern Yet never knowing Except in part The fullness to overflowing In the cerebral cortex of my heart The heart knows reason Which reason does not know Inoculated by truth a lie will weaken Like the dawn of a child in an embryo For this the battle to bring heart to speech In mind, for one to live oft' another thing dies It's the delicate balance when determined to please Suspended between fulfillment's death and the giving of life The beauty of a fractured symmetry Where thinking heart meets mind To know this elusive camaraderie Perhaps in a world in eternities time So I see myself in another life Where sorrows hold no interest A wistful smile proves transparent While intensity conveys my signet Warmth and wrath bear equal zeal But I, an antithesis in perfect balance A lonely vagrant thronged by faces Embraced by insipid attachments As honey brines by way of nectar In homes fashioned with wax Void of every ignoble stinger Known to propitiate the diffident task Thus so masked I travel still The duplicitous road yet shackled Until my tongue finds clemency From the demons my mind embattles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/12/2014 9:34:00 PM
I love it, outstanding work, straight to my favorites.
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Date: 1/11/2014 5:12:00 PM
This is brilliant sweet Sarai! You are an amazing talent! As Richard said... "spectacular"! I am so so impressed and feel so honoured to call you a close friend! Love you Sarai XOXOXOX
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/12/2014 1:02:00 PM
Ahhh... So very humbled by your praise of this heartfelt piece. I'm also honored to call you my close friend Jack. Hugs XOXOX
Date: 1/11/2014 8:23:00 AM
I feel honored to be the first to comment on this spectacular piece of writing. I like the idea of a thinking heart. I believe you can do even more with this piece. Consider expanding your thoughts between second and third stanza. I think you have more inside you to say.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/12/2014 7:23:00 PM
Hello Richard, I hope my new version gives more clarity and fullness to this piece. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your suggestion. Only a fellow poet could detect a piece left wanting. I will soup mail some ideas :-) thank you again for your encouragement on this piece. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2014 2:35:00 PM
I'm not suggesting you alter your existing ones but rather insert some additional ones. I think what you have written already is exquisite. In answer to your other question I would be honoured to write a collaboration. Soup me with ideas for a theme.
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Sarai Virden
Date: 1/12/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard, I will seriously contemplate the second and third stanzas. Who knows, I may revise it. Maybe we can work on a collaboration ? Have a wonderful day my friend!

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