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Written: August 28, 2023 ________________________________________________________________ blazing ocean's might, roaring waves crack and collide~ whispers ditch behind moon's gentle embrace, guiding waves of my essence~ Serenades my soul Unyielding current, swimmers, beware of my might~ admire from afar

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Date: 8/28/2023 8:22:00 PM
This is lovely SP You remain the master of putting ideas into words. Beast wishes SV
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Date: 8/28/2023 9:49:00 AM
They are all good but for me the third one is the diamond of the setting. Well done.
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Date: 8/28/2023 9:49:00 AM
Nice haikus.
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Date: 8/28/2023 9:37:00 AM
- "rushing waves and the gentle embrace of the moon" ....sounds romantic to my ears, Las - Beautiful :) - hugs
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