Celestial Consort

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Once when we were around
the sun setting and 
the air getting thicker
she withers like a flower
with countless jokes
dedication
sorrow continues
where no one appears
there is a wave of pain
escape from the soul
another,
tear she shed
see it flying in

thousand crystals
stared in the mirror
no one looked back
but the echo was there
her pure spirit
deepened.
she was looking at a picture
partner or clone?
still not latching well enough
the lights flicker,
threw a cryptic smile

recognize daytime stasis
our daisy fondness
Our stiff season
Is it lightning?
"cupid set us on fire"
Hang & Lazy
handling devotion
riddles on the beach

no one felt
the edifice of our stance
once you thread out
I'm reasoning now
none of us are living
this content is new

Written: October 11, 2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/12/2022 4:53:00 AM
Intriguing celestial journey my friend. Keep exploring.
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Date: 10/12/2022 2:13:00 AM
A meditation of after life? Great poetry.
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