Celebration of Wind and Fire

Celebration of Wind and Fire 

Celebrate the unseen face of God’s eternal Spirit
 Embracing all before creating light;
Action word of the eternal dance
 Hovering over the chaotic genesis of creation;
Leading exiles out of exile through empty seas with fiery pillars
 Feeding wanderers hungry for heavenly bread at dawn;
A living shadow pushing away the shadow of separation
 Planting salvation’s seed deep within the sanctuary of a young girl’s yes;
Wearing the face of a dove descending on the Word
 Leading anointed redemption into the empty desert place of prayer; 
Driving wind and flames arriving on a festival morning
 When fearful souls stood up to speak the languages of the world gathered;
Raising up a new tower of adoration reaching Heaven’s ears
  Uniting with eternal words no longer babbling;
A fire, that never burns, burns through dust of days long past and now
 Still hovering, descending, overshadowing, and dancing;
A sacred nudge delighting in coincidence
 Filling up the thirst that gnaws for serendipity in surprises;
Inspiration birthed by the invisible hand of holy mischief
 Inviting ambivalent, wavering, steps to roads of rightness in quiet whispers;
Lowering mountains, preparing highways now made straight, 
 For pilgrim’s feet gathering flowers in wild wastelands;
Caressing, prodding, in moments of a-ha ever evolving -
 Timeless mentor of universal innovation;
Handiwork of the restless holy leaping up in wild fire
 When old hearts dream dreams and young eyes see visions;
Laughing, dancing divine whimsy pirouetting through stars and galaxies  
 Never the same when touched by the Spirit dancing. 

12/2/19
Original Contest: Holy Spirit
Chantelle Anne Cooke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/28/2020 4:46:00 PM
Writing in the "third person", I see! This is easily the best poem I've ever read about the Holy Spirit, and I celebrate your win today. You hit on so many high points where the Spirit is included in the biblical telling: creation, Red Sea, Pentecost, even Hezekiah's shadow. Splendid writing, poetic and God-honoring and going straight into my faves. Grace and peace, my dear friend!
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Date: 2/4/2020 12:20:00 PM
Biblical indeed!
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Date: 1/11/2020 5:20:00 PM
Sam what a great win! Congratulations!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/17/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! And if I have not done so already I wish you all the best in the new year.
Date: 1/10/2020 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/11/2020 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve! Have a good weekend.
Date: 12/5/2019 10:07:00 PM
The spirit is alive and well in this poet. "Raising up a new tower of adoration reaching Heaven’s ears Uniting with eternal words no longer babbling;" Wow!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/7/2019 11:24:00 PM
Hi Caren, Thank you for your message and for your feedback! I seem to have a special relationship with the Holy Spirit. I am so glad that it came through in this poem that celebrates the Holy Spirit and came through to you.
Date: 12/3/2019 6:53:00 PM
wow... this is beautiful and very well crafted...love this one Sam :) hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/4/2019 2:00:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much for taking the time to look at this poem. I really value your feedback and love to read your offerings! This is one of my favorites and allowed me to meditate about the Holy Spirit!
Date: 12/2/2019 6:05:00 PM
this is one of the most masterful poems I have ever read with a religious slant. Usually they all seem the same to me, but your poem really stands out as special. FAVE
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/3/2019 1:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I am honored by your feedback and thank you for taking the time to email. Thank you!
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