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Celebration of Wind and Fire

Celebration of Wind and Fire Celebrate the unseen face of God’s eternal Spirit Embracing all before creating light; Action word of the eternal dance Hovering over the chaotic genesis of creation; Leading exiles out of exile through empty seas with fiery pillars Feeding wanderers hungry for heavenly bread at dawn; A living shadow pushing away the shadow of separation Planting salvation’s seed deep within the sanctuary of a young girl’s yes; Wearing the face of a dove descending on the Word Leading anointed redemption into the empty desert place of prayer; Driving wind and flames arriving on a festival morning When fearful souls stood up to speak the languages of the world gathered; Raising up a new tower of adoration reaching Heaven’s ears Uniting with eternal words no longer babbling; A fire, that never burns, burns through dust of days long past and now Still hovering, descending, overshadowing, and dancing; A sacred nudge delighting in coincidence Filling up the thirst that gnaws for serendipity in surprises; Inspiration birthed by the invisible hand of holy mischief Inviting ambivalent, wavering, steps to roads of rightness in quiet whispers; Lowering mountains, preparing highways now made straight, For pilgrim’s feet gathering flowers in wild wastelands; Caressing, prodding, in moments of a-ha ever evolving - Timeless mentor of universal innovation; Handiwork of the restless holy leaping up in wild fire When old hearts dream dreams and young eyes see visions; Laughing, dancing divine whimsy pirouetting through stars and galaxies Never the same when touched by the Spirit dancing. 12/2/19 Original Contest: Holy Spirit Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/28/2020 4:46:00 PM
Writing in the "third person", I see! This is easily the best poem I've ever read about the Holy Spirit, and I celebrate your win today. You hit on so many high points where the Spirit is included in the biblical telling: creation, Red Sea, Pentecost, even Hezekiah's shadow. Splendid writing, poetic and God-honoring and going straight into my faves. Grace and peace, my dear friend!
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Date: 2/4/2020 12:20:00 PM
Biblical indeed!
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Date: 1/11/2020 5:20:00 PM
Sam what a great win! Congratulations!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/17/2020 1:24:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! And if I have not done so already I wish you all the best in the new year.
Date: 1/10/2020 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/11/2020 12:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve! Have a good weekend.
Date: 12/5/2019 10:07:00 PM
The spirit is alive and well in this poet. "Raising up a new tower of adoration reaching Heaven’s ears Uniting with eternal words no longer babbling;" Wow!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/7/2019 11:24:00 PM
Hi Caren, Thank you for your message and for your feedback! I seem to have a special relationship with the Holy Spirit. I am so glad that it came through in this poem that celebrates the Holy Spirit and came through to you.
Date: 12/3/2019 6:53:00 PM
wow... this is beautiful and very well crafted...love this one Sam :) hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/4/2019 2:00:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much for taking the time to look at this poem. I really value your feedback and love to read your offerings! This is one of my favorites and allowed me to meditate about the Holy Spirit!
Date: 12/2/2019 6:05:00 PM
this is one of the most masterful poems I have ever read with a religious slant. Usually they all seem the same to me, but your poem really stands out as special. FAVE
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/3/2019 1:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I am honored by your feedback and thank you for taking the time to email. Thank you!

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