Celebration

Here I am, a young girl in the cemetery,
holding the hand of my mother in a parade,
I wore a new white dress
and my new shoes were pinching my toes.
All around the cemetery we followed the priest
as he prayed for the dead.
It was Whitsuntide,
and no tears for the decayed were to be
but a celebration was beginning . . .
We brought flowers for the graves
and a choir sang holy songs.
I felt disconnected and was thinking other thoughts,
as it was an awful, dreadful place
with moss draped tombs and weeping angel statues.
Grandma was at home preparing a Whit-Sunday meal
and there would be dancing and singing for days.
This confused me and I began to ask questions,
                                                   I, a young girl.

Like why were tombs engraved, and mother read
the words, sad words, unable to speak the words . . .
It was Spring and we carried flowers . . . 
to be divided and laid on the graves to fade tomorrow
but today, it was so festive and beautiful in the cemetery,
with the people smiling and talking joyfully
                                                 celebrating Whitsun.

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May 20, 2017

Verse/Celebration
Copyright Protected, ID 902984

Brian Strand
25 lines
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 5/24/2017 10:46:00 AM
Wow, I felt every moment in every line.
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Date: 5/22/2017 8:56:00 PM
Interesting! I looked up Whitsuntide. A lovely parade through a somber place. 7
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Date: 5/20/2017 4:42:00 PM
Lovely, heartfelt write!
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Date: 5/20/2017 10:11:00 AM
i can feel all the pain....it can cause the greatest strain....however the heart is easily healed....by all the with which it is filled....because once you do this....your Soul will truly find bliss....and Life will continue on....because Love never dies, it serves to keep us strong....bw i see you are still at it with that wonderful skill....;)
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Date: 5/20/2017 9:57:00 AM
It was a good poem, you ve written it beautifully however I m new on this site and receltly added my poems and I wojld be delighted if you could find the time to read them and g8ve your honest reviews about them
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