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Celebrating Your Birthday

Oh! how gems sparkle from glinted morning dew Wooing your view, amber rays peeking through, Enamoring jubilation as missives of love I renew On halo of golden sun inscribing ovations anew Blushing purple hues, scintillating skyline blue, Venerating day precious~ my stellar gift for you. Arrayed in crystal vase are red-roses you adore Where silken petals gleam, evoking springs of yore, In bouquet of our memories exulting evermore, For you are the love-blossoms my passions implore Titillating heart today, tomorrow, and forever; Answering my prayer, you’re life’s holy endeavor. Birds gently awakened you strumming your song As cadence of my soul, extolling you sings along, For endearing is the appeal buoyant on your zeal Soothing me in your bliss, forlorn tears you heal, My cheerful theme you are, deity of eternal glee, You are my voice of poetry, exhilarating as can be. Fabulously shines your smile on splendor of today As dreams satiated replay waltzing rhythms of ballet When lyrical praises of lifelong allegiances convey: You are the guitar my heartbeats ceaselessly play, You are the harmonics, tunes of symphonies sway In chorus of heart’s music celebrating your birthday. September 4, 2021 Poem of the day on September 6, 2021 Placed 3rd: Premium contest--A poem to your spouse Sponsor: Funom Makama

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Valsa George

Date: 11/11/2021 1:22:00 AM

What a lovely Birthday gift to your spouse. This is more valuable than ruby or diamond. I got carried away by the beauty of emotions you have expressed here.

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/20/2021 4:30:00 PM

Beautiful words sustained in the music of love! Lonna

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Lonna.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/20/2021 12:13:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on this win. Love It. Have a blessed day with this wonderful win..........

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Paula.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/20/2021 10:47:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Funom Makama

Date: 9/20/2021 7:08:00 AM

This is poetry unstained, undiluted and just raw. All the comments have said it all. I feel so honoured submitting this magnificient piece to my contest. A big big congratulations on your win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 10:37:00 AM

So very kind of you to say so. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Funom. Many thanks. And special thank you for holding contests.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/15/2021 2:40:00 AM

"You are my voice of poetry, exhilarating as can be" Loved this birthday tribute Vijay..Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/15/2021 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Delice, for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/11/2021 6:46:00 AM

This poem really touched many chords in my heart. Excellent poetry and although the contest is for a spouse, today would have been my mothers birthday, she passed 6 years ago. So very glad your outstanding write got POTD congratulations my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/11/2021 2:20:00 PM

My thoughts reach out to you as you think of your mother. Much appreciate your visit my friend. Many thanks for stopping by.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/9/2021 3:30:00 PM

congratulations on potd, so well deserved, an exceptional write.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/10/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Nancy. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2021 3:33:00 PM

hey, I see this had a POTD . BIG congrats for that, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/9/2021 12:11:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/7/2021 9:24:00 PM

Vijay, Very nice tribute to the year's accounting of time in an individual. We all should join the chorus of reverie. -Richard

Quoth Theraven
Date: 9/11/2021 2:09:00 AM

Vijay, The red roses for the betrothed celebrated well in this one. -R

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/8/2021 5:50:00 AM

So glad you stopped by Richard. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Ann Peck

Date: 9/6/2021 5:54:00 PM

A beautiful love poem, Vijay. I especially love "...you are the guitar my heartbeats ceaselessly play..." That's so lovely. Many congratulations on POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2021 6:01:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Ann. Many thanks.

Ken Rone

Date: 9/6/2021 5:38:00 PM

A beautiful ode to the one you love. Congratulations. - Ken

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2021 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Ken--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/6/2021 4:40:00 PM

This is beautiful and a true inspiration. God bless you always with many years together. Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2021 6:01:00 AM

Wonderful to read your kind remarks. Many thanks, Gina.

Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2021 1:50:00 PM

Vijay, beautiful and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY enjoy the honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/7/2021 6:00:00 AM

Honored by your visit and comments, Constance. Much appreciate you stopping by. Many thanks.

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2021 12:43:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, I see why you got poem of the day. This is such a lovely birthday dedication to your wife. I echo what Supraja said. Congratulations! It was well deserved. Best wishes in the contest.Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:50:00 PM

Thank for your complimentary feedback, Alexis. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many many thanks.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/6/2021 12:27:00 PM

Your wife is very lucky to have such a wonderful poet as husband. This is simply awesome. Every women would want a poem like this on her birthday. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd Vijay. Enjoy the honour and day ahead.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:48:00 PM

Very special to read your generous remarks, Rama. Much appreciate you stopping by. Many many thanks.

Virginia Gelok

Date: 9/6/2021 11:45:00 AM

Thankyou for your comment to my poetry. I can only hope to become as sophisticated as your writing is. I enjoyed this read very much.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:47:00 PM

I liked your poem Virginia. Your writing is superb. Much appreciate you stopping by. Many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2021 11:09:00 AM

Oh how I would love to take your words and put them to music only to sing them in the sun, not only on His birthday but every day, my whole life through, successful wishes for a win Vijay, :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:46:00 PM

So very kind of you Vienna. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/6/2021 9:53:00 AM

If a picture is worth a thousand words, then you have created a masterpiece that is priceless. This is beyond beautiful. Your thoughts are soft, sweet and romantic. Simply breathtaking. Such a wonderful tribute. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:46:00 PM

Very special to read your accolades my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Brandy. Many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/6/2021 9:33:00 AM

Magnificent Vijay, who wouldn’t be overjoyed to receive such a loving poem on their birthday, it’d be the best gift ever. Loved every one of your romantic lines and this one especially - “You are my voice of poetry, exhilarating as can be.” Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 1:43:00 PM

Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Belle. Many thanks for stopping by.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/6/2021 8:16:00 AM

Wow! Amazing write, Vijay! Congrats on POTD

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 9:16:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, US. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/6/2021 7:41:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate you, my dearest friend, Vijay! I am happy to be the one who has favored it! Proud of you! Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 7:44:00 AM

Honor my friend to receive your accolades. Much appreciate your return visit, Demetrios. Yes, indeed--so special to earn your FAVE. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/6/2021 7:29:00 AM

Back with Congrats Vijay!!! I knew this one was special !!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 7:40:00 AM

Thank you for your return visit Mike. Much appreciate, as always.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2021 7:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A "Beautiful" write. Love It. Your pen was working overtime. Have a blessed day..........

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 7:40:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Paula with your kind remarks. Much appreciate your feedback. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/6/2021 7:05:00 AM

CONGRATS on your honor, Vijay. This masterpiece certainly deserves to be declared POTD! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/6/2021 7:39:00 AM

That is so very kind of you, Janice. So nice to hear. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.