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Cedar Chest of Memories

Music fills the air, as the radio plays Letting go of memories, bringing back forgotten faces Daddy took that photograph...a captured you, a smiling trace A magic moment....a magic day... You gave me your cameo, that birthday in May... There was joy in your face, while I posed dressed in lace... Oh, yes.... here is that dress! let me carefully place Upon the bedspread....Mom,...are you watching today?.... The dress,.. still so lovely, ....we picked it together... A bow in the back...and embroidery on the hem... A sweetheart neckline, and a small rose on the breast.. The color of a pale sky...soft as a feather... I wore this cameo.....now I wear it again.... As I fold this sweet memory,....back in the chest.... for Constance's contest "Italian Sonnet"

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Date: 6/25/2010 12:32:00 PM
Beautiful, touhing Italian Sonnet, Carrie. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Laini
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Date: 6/25/2010 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Italian Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 8:39:00 PM
Poignant and tender, CArrie. Very nice. You did twelve syllables per line, which is a more modern variation on the form. Awesome job. Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 3:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Carrie, on 6th place in my Italian Sonnet Contest, with this beautiful poem.. love Constance
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Date: 6/12/2010 6:19:00 PM
This gem is such a perfect entry for Constance's "Italian Sonnet"! Beautiful sonnet and a definite winner, Carrie! Please read my First Blog...Thanks. Love, Audrey
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:37:00 PM
Great imagery in this work! Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 6/11/2010 7:29:00 PM
A nice recollection of memories in tranquility. Octave and sestet quite perfect. Good luck in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 6/11/2010 3:59:00 PM
You brought back some precious memories of sorting through family photos, Carrie. What a beautiful sonnet! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:29:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem Carrie, sad memory, but a wonderful sonnet how you captured every move to your poem, and explained the sweet memory you had whitin,..p.d.
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:39:00 AM
what a beauty,what a gem. .brought me a tear,dear. .
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