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Caw Cophony

The death eaters flew onyx agate eyes, prince’s of darkness pall bearers of morn, they flew….. Between rivers of tar onto islands of emerald in mated pairs they flew…. Beak and talon gore blind sided by entropy pinioned pirates black holes of caw cophony. Serpent tongues splay shredding the cosmos they flew………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/15/2009 5:40:00 PM
Have you been reading Stephen King, Edgar Allen Poe...watching creepy movies??? Oooh, I so love this creepy imagery. Dark and eerie, almost reminds me of those Nazgul from Lord of the Rings. Thanks for stopping by on my poem Debbie sweet. Going to soup mail you. hugs, shar xoxoxo
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Date: 9/13/2009 1:55:00 PM
You gave me a post to say, (I love your constructive criticism) it short emotions, love it and you really are a good poet, Robert Ball God bless.
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:32:00 AM
Brilliant, vivid images, my dear friend! The title rocks, too! I missed your words, Deb. I love seeing through your minds eyes! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/11/2009 1:55:00 AM
Excellent words Deborah, I left you some mail...Raul
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:43:00 PM
original phrasing! Deb!...jim
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Date: 9/10/2009 2:13:00 PM
Different. Very descriptive in an unusual way. Sara
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