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butterflies cavort over summer's garden .... dragging august in

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Date: 7/28/2025 7:08:00 AM
Sara, Love the pairing of butterflies and cavort. Literary ingenuity at its best. And an excellent closing line which underpins its overall merit as a work Howard
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2025 1:40:00 PM
Why, thank you, Howard. I am glad you liked it. Your visits are appreciated. Sara K
Date: 7/28/2025 5:57:00 AM
Dear Sara, what a delicate glimpse of late summer’s charm. It’s a lovely moment caught in words. I always tell my granddaughters about butterflies but I change the words to Flutterbies and the Spanish word Mariposa for their fun and enjoyment. Summer Blessings, Dear Sara, Daniel
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2025 1:39:00 PM
Glad that you find the time to celebrate grandchildren and to use words from other languages so their vocabulary will be expanded. Thanks for the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K
Date: 7/27/2025 8:29:00 AM
Lovely imagery—so much movement and warmth in so few words. I can feel August drifting in on those wings
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Date: 7/27/2025 11:06:00 AM
Thank you, Rowena. It is almost here with its heat. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 9:57:00 PM
This is a beautiful haiku, my dear Sara, aesthetically beautiful for august. Best, Anne
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 3:42:00 AM
Why, thank you, Anne. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 5:25:00 PM
I giggled, intended or not, clever last line was met by me with a spontaneous giggle and I needed that! I've had a turned down day, now I have butterfly beauties and clever giggle giving words. I don't even have to pay you for healing therapy! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 3:41:00 AM
I am delighted, CayCay, that you got healing from this Haiku. It came to me when I was looking out my kitchen window and thinking how poorly my plants were looking in the flower garden then suddenly two yellow butterflies came into my view dancing with each other. The Haiku thought followed and then I felt I needed to write it down. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 4:34:00 PM
this is a stunning Haiku! Well done, Sara K! hugs, Sara B
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 3:37:00 AM
Thank you, Sara B. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 1:47:00 PM
- Lovely written, Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/27/2025 3:36:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, always nice to have you drop by. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 12:06:00 PM
Great haiku here, Sara. You portray in great style how butterflies drag August in.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2025 12:53:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. Their numbers increase as summer goes on. They are so beautiful. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 11:16:00 AM
What a lovely write you have here. I love pretty butterflies and this write. Pretty Picture... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2025 12:52:00 PM
Glad you liked it Paula. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
Date: 7/26/2025 11:15:00 AM
Love this one. It uses a great end line
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2025 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit and encouraging review. Sara K

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