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Cavity-Filled

The more I stare at Mona Lisa"s fabled smile, the more I see nothing there that's faintly mystical; none in those lips is remotely enigmatic, none in their slight slant is celestially aesthetic. In fact, there are other ways of looking at it: a smile of one trying to explain some mild mischief, suppressing an embarassing big burp, maybe, or one deftly hiding her cavity-filled teeth !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/27/2008 8:16:00 PM
I like very humorful didnt know if that was the purpose but good way of critiqing art from your perception good job, Foy
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Romeo Naces
Date: 5/21/2019 10:08:00 PM
Thanks, Trey. Yes, just humoring.

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